Myself
Being an immigtant to Canada was our ultimate goal, however my family and I faced many challenges when we decided to immigrate to Canada in order to get a better life for us and for our children.
There is no denying that, the situation in the Middle East in the last decade became the worst ever, due to wars, poverty, and lack of education in that area. Most people in our countries are dreaming about immigration to Canada. that’s why my family and I decided to move to Canada. Although we succeeded to come to Canada, but our lives were not as easy as we though it would be. we have faced many challenges and difficulties to settle down here for instance the language barier , the weather, education and Work
Being a non-native English/French speaker was and still our biggest challenge to integrate in the Canadian society. although we study English in egypt, but we do not practice the language at all. Since my family and I moved here, we put all our efforts in refreshing our memory with the grammar, vocabulary, in addition to learning the idioms doing our best to become part from the society.
Secondly, the weather in Canada specifically in Quebec is brutal regarding to the weather in egypt. The influence of weather and climate is affecting my family and I in many different aspects such as health, and physiology.
Alough I have a Bachelor degree from egypt, but it was exteremly hard to get a job here in my field. having a Canadian credentials and/or Canadian experience is a must to get in any job. To get my credentials recognized from Canada, I had to re-study some courses, and it took me two years to complete them.
In conclusion, being and immigran is not an easy way to live well and have a betterlife. For immigrants it is not easy to adopt the culture and the way that people behave.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That&apos
...e dreaming about immigration to Canada. that's why my family and I decided to move t...
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Line 4, column 487, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...wn here for instance the language barier , the weather, education and Work Be...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...e to integrate in the Canadian society. although we study English in egypt, but we do no...
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Line 10, column 170, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...climate is affecting my family and I in many different aspects such as health, and physiology....
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Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...mly hard to get a job here in my field. having a Canadian credentials and/or Canadian ...
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Line 13, column 164, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...entials and/or Canadian experience is a must to get in any job. To get my credentials r...
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Line 15, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is not easy to adopt the culture and the way that people behave.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67076923077 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68282005165 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8655115388 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.2 Out of 6.0
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