People work to make money for living. Work important for people to provide a place to live in, food, school, medical services if needed, transportation and so on.
Working and having a job teaching people to be responsible for them self and to the community. To them self by providing a type of life that they want and for the community by doing whatever type of job to complete the community different needs.
Work build trust in people, self-esteem and teaching new skills like communication with other people.
Work can give you a chance to know new and different people and make friends, learn about different cultures.
Some time jobs can be earned by self-learning and practising, Most of the jobe need to be achieved from going to school.
There is a lot of different kind of jobs each is very important for building our community and farther more our country.
Sentence: To them self by providing a type of life that they want and for the community by doing whatever type of job to compleat the community different need.
Error: compleat Suggestion: complete
Sentence: Work build trust in people, self-esteem and teaching new skills like communication with other people.
Error: self-esteem Suggestion: self esteem
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