In daily life, we have many activities. Such as eating, drinking, sleeping. But what 's about working? Why do we need to work? Let's go through this question.
We need to work to live. Because as I mentioned, we need to eat, to drink. But where can we get food and water? In primitive life, people do that by hunting, cropping. That's work, today is also. But what if we can not hunting or cropping, maybe that occurs with you cause you are living in the city, then you must pay for it. You have to make a deal, exchange it by what you have, that can be anything valuable with people who have nourishment, and that might basically money. And how could you get money without working? Even begging is also working.
By far when we sacrificed our basic demand for feeding. We might think further. Think about the other demand. We need to entertain, we need to move,... And working once again allows us to make money for buying vehicles, televisions, video games, or any stuff that sacrificed our demands.
Finally, we need to work to develop society. To manufacture and improve products. Economic developed by better goods. By earning knowledge, qualification, develop the technology. This is just only done by working, learning, producing,... are also different kinds of work. Without work, there are no new things, better things.
In brief, we need to work. Not only for surviving, but also for developing.
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