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Film review of The Lake house (not finished)
Eng lit
The lake house is a mind twisting, heart-melting time-wrap romance. An architect, Alex Wayer, and a doctor, Kate Forster, meet because of a lake house where they are both staying at. It all seems a little cliché and similar to classical love stories when you first hear about it, but there is a hitch which makes this a love story to remember. They stay in the house at the same day, same month, but they’re in a different year, Alex in 2004 and Kate in 2006. As they find out about each other through the mysterious time shifting mailbox at the house, their relationship blooms.
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Sentence: As the story unravels, we understand the main theme as time-wrap, fantasy and romance, thou at some point a few time-wrap events leaves viewers confused, especially when Alex interferes with Kate's life occasionally which leaves an open paradox confusing the audience, wondering how that could happen.
Description: The fragment events leaves viewers is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace leaves with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: We watch as these two main characters develop feelings for each other they while the story spins around them.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a conjunction, subordinating
Suggestion: Refer to they and while
Sentence: Although it was indeed a bit confusing in the end, where the time was fiddled with From awws to questions , tbut their acting could have been better.
Error: awws Suggestion: ?
Error: tbut Suggestion: but
Sentence: As the story unravels, we understand the main theme as time-wrap, fantasy and romance, thou at some point a few time-wrap events leaves viewers confused, especially when Alex interferes with Kate's life occasionally which leaves an open paradox confusing the audience, wondering how that could happen.
Error: thou Suggestion: ?
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 595 350
No. of Characters: 2703 1500
No. of Different Words: 290 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.939 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.543 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.188 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.491 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.625 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07