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Some people think that music related to people future career, others think that school is most important to bright future
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-01-02 | Deis Rostiyanti | 43 | view |
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Sentence: Many parents teachs their children to get high education because they think that good career determine by good education too.
Description: The fragment parents teachs their is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace teachs with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: The fragment career determine by is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace determine with verb, past participle
Sentence: Part of people get their good career in education and the other one get their bright future in music.
Description: A numeral, cardinal is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to one and get
Sentence: But anything that we choose have a risk because not all of people who has choose to have career in music, get what they want.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to choose and have
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and choose
Sentence: All of it is depend on our luck.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and depend
Sentence: Be a scientist or become a musicians, it is depend on our sincerity.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and depend
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 119 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1385 1500
No. of Different Words: 119 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.074 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.002 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.657 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.263 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.404 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.196 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5