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informal letter

hello dear Alex it was great to hear from you.I'm so happy that you've passed your exam and made some extra cash to splash out. you said you don't know whether to buy a computer game or save up and purchase some cloths in the future. if I were you I wouldn't buy neither of them, I would save that money for a rainy day. also you asked my opinion so in your shoes I would go for a video game, having lots of fancy cloths made me think you don't need any more cloths and you can have more if you tell your parent on the other hand if you buy a new computer game it will chill you up and re fresh your brain for a new semester.

I hope it could be useful for you .

let me know if you need a person to shop around with .

love

Hanieh .

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