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success

How do you think about success? Does that mean we have much money, a good job, many friends or become to a powerful people? In my opinion, success is when we achieve our goals that we have to try to do day by day in our life. the goals is such as hard-working to find a great job, a high score in the examination. for me, I still haven't successed yet. To be have succession, I have to hard-working and studying. I have to improve my language skills and try to learn new thing that they will help me in my job and my life. I want to be a bussiness woman. I want to take care of my family and my parents as well. these are important thing I have to do ahead, base on these I can achieve the succession.

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Sentence: In my opinion, success is when we achieve our goals that we have to try to do day by day in our life. the goals is such as hard-working to find a great job, a high score in the examination. for me, I still haven't successed yet.
Error: successed Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: I want to be a bussiness woman.
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business

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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.978 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
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