This memo from the advertising director of Super SCreen Movie Production Company state that the Company should increase its budget next year to reach the public through advertising because positive reviews are not reaching the public about their good quality movies. There are many things vague in the argument and a lot of questions should be answered.
Firstly, the author state that by their report in fewer people attended the Super Screen-produced movies. But, the author did not provided any answer about how the survey is done? who participated in those survey? why fewer people are coming to watch movies? Without answers of those question, the argument falls apart.
Secondly, the author states that the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers are increased in recent years. But, the author did not mention about the percentage. There might be the same people reviewing the movies the total number of moviegoer is less than anytime. Also, the author failed to answer the questions such as, how the percentage differ from now and then? who are those movie reviewers? are they professional? Besides, it is not clear where are they posting those reviews? and why are those reviews are not reaching to the people.
Thirdly, the author states that people are not aware and their movie is good quality. There is a possibility that People are aware of Super Screen movies and its quality but the price of those tickets are so high. The author did not answered about it. Also, the author fails to provide any other reasons that are affecting the company.
In conclusion, Without answer of the questions stated above, this arguent becomes unwarranted and all those answer should be answered before going to make a decision.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 288 350
No. of Characters: 1410 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.896 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.328 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.503 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.37 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nswered. Firstly, the author state that by their report in fewer people attende...
^^
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he author state that by their report in fewer people attended the Super Screen-p...
^^
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...roduced movies. But, the author did not provided any answer about how the survey is done...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...ny answer about how the survey is done? who participated in those survey? why fewer...
^^^
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
...done? who participated in those survey? why fewer people are coming to watch movies...
^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...he percentage differ from now and then? who are those movie reviewers? are they pro...
^^^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...nd then? who are those movie reviewers? are they professional? Besides, it is not c...
^^^
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...r where are they posting those reviews? and why are those reviews are not reaching ...
^^^
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'answer'
Suggestion: answer
...tickets are so high. The author did not answered about it. Also, the author fails to pro...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 288.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03472222222 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40802053268 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7543605569 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 119.503703932 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 23.324526521 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.70786347227 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306223667198 0.218282227539 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960542930916 0.0743258471296 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918698614943 0.0701772020484 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162565255495 0.128457276422 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859492331883 0.0628817314937 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.3799401198 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.3550499002 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.197005988 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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