"According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the last year. Clearly, the content of these reviews is not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not in the quality of our movies but with public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater quantity of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
The director of the super screen Movie production company needs a pragmatic analysis of the report from his marketing team, before he reaches the conclusion that only place they are lacking is not being able to create awareness for their movies in the audience , So answering a few basic questions will surely help.
Is the trend same for a large majority of Production companies?
There might be a case where there has been a significant rise in the piracy, and movies might be available for audiences for free so audience are not reaching out into the theater to watch movies.
Apart from movies getting good reviews, How rest of the movies are doing?
There might be possibility that other movies apart from ones getting good reviews, are getting disastrous reviews. And these regularly under performing movies are mitigating against attracting audience to watch sporadic well reviewed movies.
Movies are getting positive reviews but are their contents pertinent to the audience?
Movies based erudite concepts may be acclaimed by critics but it might be very difficult to decode for the general audience.
So, the conclusion production houses failure is just not being able to reach the masses and spend a whole lot of budget in doing so, may create additional issues for the production house if above mentioned questions are not properly answered.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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flaws:
No. of Words: 222 350
Minimum 250 words wanted. better to have around 400 words. need to paraphrase the text of prompts and argue accordingly which can help add more content.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 222 350
No. of Characters: 1108 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.86 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.991 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.49 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.095 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.441 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.769 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...areness for their movies in the audience , So answering a few basic questions will...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ossibility that other movies apart from ones getting good reviews, are getting disas...
^^^^
Line 12, column 101, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...ng able to reach the masses and spend a whole lot of budget in doing so, may create addit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 222.0 441.139720559 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53640468976 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 204.123752495 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.468620217663 128% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3188091988 57.8364921388 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.324526521 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.70786347227 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173869479344 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869876112357 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655941211538 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907758877118 0.128457276422 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704660504186 0.0628817314937 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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