In this argument, the number of accidents is not decreasing in Prunty County even after lowering the speed from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all country highways. However, many points are given in evidence to support the argument is not convincing.
Firstly, the author is trying to prove that if the speed will be lowered from 55 to 45 mph accidents will reduce. However, it does not support the statement it's also possible that in Prunty country axioms should be not followed properly and hence become the reason for accidents.
Secondly, the author is comparing Prunty County from Butler County. This argument has many loopholes as the author is talking on the basis of his assumptions. There is a possibility of different rules and infrastructure the roads of Butler County should be always under maintenance.
Lastly, Prunty County must have fewer people rather than Prunty County and hence there is a lower number of accidents in Prunty County.
Hence, the author has to collect more information to improve highway safety. The author must search for some solid evidence.
- The following recommendation appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewell."Two years ago, the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel. During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, n 50
- In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patro 33
- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerne 16
- "Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system becausemoral behavior cannot be legislated." 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nty should be always under maintenance. Lastly, Prunty County must have fewer pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 28.8173652695 24% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 2260.96107784 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 441.139720559 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07222222222 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.56307096286 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55880831638 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 705.55239521 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6495683906 57.8364921388 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.70786347227 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325036573718 0.218282227539 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117319620899 0.0743258471296 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124195042829 0.0701772020484 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170424224298 0.128457276422 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867480642213 0.0628817314937 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 98.500998004 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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