The argument made in the newspaper editorial stated that, the autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders. If the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked,both its economy and national identity are endangered. The author assumes that the illegal immigrants pose such threats and efforts must be made to return them to their country of origin. The supposed conclusion is unwarranted and the author is too quick to assumes that the illegal immigrants are their enemies and they poses the potential threats to their economy and national identity. There are various topics where still needed to be researched to further bolster the presumed conclusion.
The author stated that the autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders. Such assumption is unwarranted. The illegal immigrants can enter the country not only from the borders but from other means like flights and marine links. For an example if anyone get on hands to make illegal passport, there is a good chance he/she can get into the country easily through the legal means of transport unless caught. The main point is, strengthen only the border is not the effective way to stop the illegal immigrants. there may be various other ways. So to stop such incidents, strict checking on the other places need to be made. Research must be done in this topic; what are the other ways where illegal peoples are entering into the country.
There is a unwarranted assumption that the illegal immigrants are threats to their economy and national identity. There is a lack of research whether these people are actually responsible for the mentioned threats. The people may be good ones which have the inherent skills in doing business. These people may start running business in the country which eventually helps in growing the economy. For an instance, if any immigrant is good in making any product, he/she can help to start the local business and help for a good cause. The idea to made then return to their own country may not be the good idea.
However, many citizens would agree with the idea to return these people to their own country, because they might hate them for no reason. But this may be the baseless effort. And one should not quickly conclude that,the illegal immigrants are threats to their economy and national identity. Therefore, primarily, research must be done in various fields in order to make such conclusions.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 1993 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.779 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.368 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.955 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.677 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.466 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...nts entering a country cannot be checked,both its economy and national identity are e...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pose'
Suggestion: pose
...l immigrants are their enemies and they poses the potential threats to their economy ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... marine links. For an example if anyone get on hands to make illegal passport, ther...
^^^
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ive way to stop the illegal immigrants. there may be various other ways. So to stop s...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... entering into the country. There is a unwarranted assumption that the illegal...
^
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...And one should not quickly conclude that,the illegal immigrants are threats to their...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 413.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94673123487 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48637983211 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443099273608 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8674078407 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8260869565 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9565217391 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95652173913 5.70786347227 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431364657588 0.218282227539 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128909245936 0.0743258471296 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148776411359 0.0701772020484 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267709905471 0.128457276422 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157996666676 0.0628817314937 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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