The author made the prediction that the life-sized sculptures will decrease in value while the miniatures increase in value by the assumption that ancient Kalinese artists used molds to create statue. However, to make the prediction reliable, 3 more questions need to ask.
The first question is that are ancient Kalinese artists really use molds of actual bodies to create statues? The author got the conclusion that ancient Kalinese artists used molds of actual bodies to create statues due to the finding of molds of human heads and hands on Kali. The reason is not convictive since molds of human heads and hands on Kali can be used for other reasons as well instead of creating statues. What is more, molds of human heads and hands finding on Kali does not mean that Kali really have this kind of thing. There is possibility that these things are brought to Kali by a person and no other people in Kali other than this person have seen this kind of thing before. The author need more accurate and direction evident like a picture or document at that time to show ancient Kalinese artists used molds of actual bodies to create statues .
The Second question is that are Kalinese miniature statues were abstract and entirely different in style due to not using molds?There are many other reasons other than not using mold to explain the reason why Kalinese miniature statues were abstract and entirely different in style. For instance, maybe abstract and distinctive style is just one of the the artistic methods to create statue. It is also likely that ancient Kalinese artists create can also create miniature statues using molds since there is no direct relationship between molds and abstract statue style.
The Third question is that is whether using only sculpting tools and techniques instead of molds the standard for the value of statues? Only if the standard for the value of statues is totally based on using only sculpting tools and techniques to create statues, can the finding of ancient Kalinese artists using molds of actual bodies to create statues decrease the value of the statues. However, it need to be stressed that the value is a broad concept and have many categories. When we value the statues in art, some people may think using molds instead of just sculpting tools and techniques can not really reflect the talent of the artist. But not having high art value does not mean the statue not having great historic and archaeological value. These statues can also be valuable research resource to some historians and archaeologist to study the use of molds of actual bodies in statue creating.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282377919321 0.25644967241 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.16135881104 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108280254777 0.0836205057962 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0636942675159 0.0520304965353 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00636942675159 0.0272364105082 23% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.116772823779 0.125424944231 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0445859872611 0.0416121511921 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37852644366 2.79052419416 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036093418259 0.026700313972 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0976645435244 0.113004496875 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169851380042 0.0255425247493 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106157112527 0.0127820249294 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2634.0 2731.13054187 96% => OK
No of words: 446.0 446.07635468 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90582959641 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354260089686 0.378187486979 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2533632287 0.287650121315 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156950672646 0.208842608468 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0717488789238 0.135150697306 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37852644366 2.79052419416 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 207.018472906 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.374439461883 0.469332199767 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.8577628285 52.1807786196 78% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 26.2352941176 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5477021111 57.7814097925 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.941176471 141.986410481 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2352941176 23.2022227129 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.724660767414 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.58251231527 195% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.5716169876 51.9672348444 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.91743119266 1.8405768891 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303941857714 0.441005458295 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.219613062244 0.135418324435 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.161535986928 0.0829849096947 195% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.620981629225 0.58762219726 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147784915824 0.147661913831 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149777080904 0.193483328276 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751433133751 0.0970749176394 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.371809326329 0.42659136922 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0502559997055 0.0774707102158 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21064750606 0.312017818177 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779707145867 0.0698173142475 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 6.46551724138 155% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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