It’s stated that restrictions of new houses in Maple County might result in an increase in housing prices in the County. This assumption needs to be better analyzed for some reasons.
Firstly, the examples used might not be a good way to make these predictions. The discussion about the prices have as a paragon Counties that might not have similar farmland area or similar quantity of inhabitants that Maple County has. Since there is no pattern, it could be difficult to stablish a prediction only based in one or two examples from a universe of other Counties.
Secondly, the predictions are based in old examples and might result in a fallacious perspective. The dynamics in the county side could suffer many changes in ten or fifteen years which can create a reckless prediction about what could happen with Maple County if the propose is accepted. In this amount of time, it’s possible that houses in Pine and Chestnut might be more valuable since the area could have developed itself or the population had growth. In this sense, the reduction in new house supply would not completely justify why house prices had increased in these places.
Finally, the predictions might be fallacious if there are no big changes in the demands for houses. If Maple County has a well stablished demand with no possibilities of an increase in the amount of persons interested in buy farmland, then prices could not be changed since demand was not modified.
In conclusion, one can see that the prediction made might be inaccurate. In order to reinforce the arguments it’s interesting to better analyze if the examples are really good to be used; also, it would be interesting to look for more recent scenarios where these policies were applied; finally, one should analyze with attention the relation between supply and demand for houses in Maple County.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Since there is no pattern, it could be difficult to stablish a prediction only based in one or two examples from a universe of other Counties.
Error: stablish Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: If Maple County has a well stablished demand with no possibilities of an increase in the amount of persons interested in buy farmland, then prices could not be changed since demand was not modified.
Error: stablished Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1505 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.839 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.567 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.242 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.609 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... what could happen with Maple County if the propose is accepted. In this amount of time, it...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 311.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0192926045 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67516772716 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501607717042 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6520254014 57.8364921388 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.70786347227 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117582452589 0.218282227539 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419833349289 0.0743258471296 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469439700473 0.0701772020484 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742484030602 0.128457276422 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199783146672 0.0628817314937 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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