The following recommendation sent by Vice President of human resource to President of Climpson Industries. In this Vice President, made an assumption that by implementing new software for detecting westage time of employee we find out and improve productivity of employee. There are several unwarrented assumption made in this arguments. Before implementing this recommendation following arguments taken into consideration.
Firstly, Authors made assumption to improve the productivity of our employee, we should implement electronic monitoring of employee internet use. At certain instant it's Ok to monitor employee usage on internet, but after that its embarrasssing to work for employee or it may result in aggressiveness. There are several other factors which authors may take into consideration. such as to motivate the employee make friendly nature among each one, add section which include employee ideas. Employee of the week award so that employee may get start working in effective manner.
Secondly, The authors made assumption by implementing this new software we found out employee punished him/her and reducing number of hours which spent for shopping and other work. Even though at each every time employee can't spend time on shopping or gaming. Other reason also consider it might useful to company work also. Even if number of hours reduce by finding wastage time, employee can't work continuously with same efficiency throught 8 hours working. so there might be relaxation required for every employee after some working hours.
Last think that authors provide that, this all productivity increase by implementing new software. author can't consider the Expenditure require for this software, its maintainance. Again as this is used for employee there is also requirement for one person to handling for this software, his/ her salary its cost bear by company.
The conclusion to be that, by implementing monitoring software once productivity can improved. This is thing that, every industries apply in different way so that employee may get motivated, spend more time can't made effective work. There several assumption made so the argument become weak argument.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1813 1500
No. of Different Words: 171 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.412 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.899 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.706 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.932 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.138 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sent by Vice President of human resource to President of Climpson Industries. In ...
^^
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ecting westage time of employee we find out and improve productivity of employee. T...
^^^
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...employee. There are several unwarrented assumption made in this arguments. Before implemen...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... several unwarrented assumption made in this arguments. Before implementing this rec...
^^^^
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nted assumption made in this arguments. Before implementing this recommendation follo...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Before implementing this recommendation following arguments taken into considera...
^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: IT_IS[8]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ployee internet use. At certain instant its Ok to monitor employee usage on interne...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...ch authors may take into consideration. such as to motivate the employee make friend...
^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...implementing this new software we found out employee punished him/her and reducing ...
^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...Even though at each every time employee cant spend time on shopping or gaming. Other...
^^^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...onsider it might useful to company work also. Even if number of hours reduce by find...
^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...educe by finding wastage time, employee cant work continuously with same efficiency ...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...me efficiency throught 8 hours working. so there might be relaxation required for ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
... increase by implementing new software. author cant consider the Expenditure require f...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...se by implementing new software. author cant consider the Expenditure require for th...
^^^^
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne person to handling for this software, his/ her salary its cost bear by company...
^^
Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oyee may get motivated, spend more time cant made effective work. There several assu...
^^^^
Line 9, column 240, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...re time cant made effective work. There several assumption made so the argument become weak argume...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 334.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55389221557 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97770559502 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6393041458 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259154813049 0.218282227539 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867678416947 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955490235788 0.0701772020484 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147059294471 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948429537534 0.0628817314937 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.5979740519 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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