The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
A letter to the editor has said that mopeds are a popular form of transportation for people on Balmer Island. Also, the author said that the population of the island increases during the summer time and observed accidents involving pedestrians and mopeds. In order to reduce the problem with accidents, he or she proposed to limit daily moped rentals like another town called Seaville did. Though this may be a good recomendation, there are several questions that should be answered to evaluate it.
Firstly, is Seaville comparable to Balmer Island? This question is important to answer because if not, then there are crucial differences that would not make this proposal a good one. For instance, the streets could be wider in Seaville which means that there is more space for motorists and less traffic for them. In addition, it is important to ask how different motorists are from pedestrians since their risky behaviors could indicate how likely they are to be involved in an accident. To illustrate, if jaywalking is more common in Balmer Island than in Seaville, then it makes sense that pedestrians are likely to get hit by a vehicle, which is commonly a moped. If so, then the proposal to limit rentals is not a good one since the two places are not comparable.
In addition, though it makes sense that an increase in population could indicate an increase in accidents, there are questions that need to be answered about the people who ride mopeds. The author mentioned that a population increase occurs during the summertime. Do people who come to Balmer Island actually ride and rent mopeds? If so, it could mean that those who come bring their own mopeds and get involved in an accident involving a moped without actually renting one. This means that limiting the amount that is rented will not hasten the issue of accidents involving pedestrians. Furthermore, it is critical to ask if most accidents involving pedestrians actually involve rented mopeds. If accidents do not involve rented mopeds, then there is no way that limiting moped rental will actually retard the number of accidents.
Lastly, the author says that by halving the amount rented, then so will the number of accidents involving pedestrians and mopeds. It is crucial to ask here if all rented mopeds are involved in an accident. It is highly unlikely that this assumption will hold since it is so unlikely. Nevertheless, if it actually turns out to be true then this would be a good recommendation. Again, it is also important to ask if this town is comparable to Seaville. Does Seaville also have 50% fewer accidents because they enacted this proposal? If not, then the recommendation is not a good one since the two towns are not comparable.
In conclusion, the author makes several assumptions that need a lot of questions answered in order to decide wether or not this is a good proposal, especially for the extreme assumptions such as halving the amount of rentals will halve the amount of accidents.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 506 350
No. of Characters: 2428 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.743 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.798 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.647 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 180 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.824 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.84 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.477 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...tion of the island increases during the summer time and observed accidents involving pedest...
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Line 6, column 253, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...a population increase occurs during the summertime. Do people who come to Balmer Island ac...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.6327345309 173% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 28.8173652695 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 2260.96107784 110% => OK
No of words: 506.0 441.139720559 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93083003953 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74165951036 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409090909091 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 705.55239521 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6803852873 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.24 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162131390562 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604180405784 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828376467156 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10115234069 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937435198653 0.0628817314937 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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