From the information given, Batavia faces a situation in which there is an extra supply of dairiy products with a simultaneous excesive increase of the milk price. If agriculture is growing in Batavia and becoming such a relevant sector in this region, the case should be carefully studied before the government takes action in this matter.
One important question raises when considering this problem: are the dairy farms actually producing milk? Although this question may seem dumb, this problem could be the result of fraudulent farms. This situation is likely if, for example, there is economic support for new farms. In this case, the government must consider if any mechanism could be the cause of a particular interest in starting a farm.
In the case that these new farms are not a deceit, it is important to know the cause of the significant increase in the number of farms. Some innovative agricultural methods or practices on the cows, could increase the production of dairy products (and the interest on investing in such projects), but imply, at the same time, an increase of its price. If this is the case, decreasing the prices of these products will only cause a decrese in thir production.
If the answers to these questions are given, and there is no justfication for an increase of the prices, then the solution of the letter would the best option. This could provide the best solution for some unwanted processes, for example, as a farmers' strategy to get more money, or a consequence of the competition between them.
Hence, the government of Batavia, should only implement this solution after considering the needs of, not only the general citizens affected by the prices increase, but also of the farmers that produce these products.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 294 350
No. of Characters: 1424 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.141 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.65 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.03 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.661 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erest on investing in such projects, but imply, at the same time, an increase of ...
^^
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
...e unwanted processes, for example, as a farmers strategy to get more money, or a conseq...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 294.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01360544218 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69763703862 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3713775305 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128360252863 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502904032548 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250063162549 0.0701772020484 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709928841708 0.128457276422 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271578990569 0.0628817314937 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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