The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice to a client.
"Homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last year that region experienced 90 days with below-average temperatures, and climate forecasters at Waymarsh University predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes have been built in this region during the past year. Because these developments will certainly result in an increased demand for heating oil, we recommend investment in Consolidated Industries, one of whose major business operations is the retail sale of home heating oil."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The letter to a client provides a strong recommendation to invest his money into Consolidated Industries which sails oil for heating homes. Reading the letter, one can assume that it contains powerful arguments such as coming colder winters and using oil as a traditional fuel to heat homes in the northeastern part of USA. Although, investigating in more details a lot of logical flaws can be found which undermine the rationality of this advice.
The statement which is indefinite it is why a client should invest his money exactly into this firm. Though, the letter provides the information that Consolidated Industries’s key business is selling oil, there is no proof in the prosperity of this firm in this trade. Possibly, there are other competitors on the market with higher demand from consumers. The others might provide heating oil with the better quality or with lower prices. It means that possible buyers will turn towards them rather than Consolidated Industries.
One more factor to look at closely is the weather forecast at Waymarsh University. How trustworthy is this forecast? Can people rely on the prescience that winters will be more severe and colder? We cannot quit likelihood that the University made a mistake in its predictions. As well, there is no proof in that other sources came to the same conclusion. Since the topic changing the winter weather on a long-term base is serious, to promulgate such announces as Waymarsh University did, more accurate research is needed. Thus, we can conclude that last winter with low temperatures was an exception, and this will not occur again.
In the letter one claims that oil has been used as a ground fuel in that region, though it is not presented clearly about conventional state of things. Perhaps, people have realized that to heat their homes with other types of fuel might be low-cost and more effective. Additionally, the mentioned houses which were built last year, maybe, have already been equipped with more modern heating systems than ones based on using oil. What leads to the conclusion that in the nearest future people will stop to purchase oil.
To sum up, there are not provided powerful arguments which would say that the recommendation to invest client’s money into Consolidated Industries is wise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... homes in the northeastern part of USA. Although, investigating in more details a lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, thus, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81674482308 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8357565511 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.70786347227 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209785762592 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562201404305 0.0743258471296 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529660331748 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117877748793 0.128457276422 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489141255495 0.0628817314937 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.