The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice to a client.
Homes in northern Europe, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used wood as their major fuel for heating homes. Last year that region experienced two months of below-average temperatures, and local weather forecasters throughout the region predict that this weather pattern will continue for several years. Furthermore, many new homes have been built in this region during the past year. Based on these developments, we predict a large increase in the demand for firewood. Therefore, we recommend investment in Woodchuck Industries, whose major business operations is the retail sale of firewood for homes.
The author of the letter has recommended to the client that, the client should invest in woodchuck industries as the demand for wood will rise in northern Europe due to fall in average temperature of the region and it is going to continue for several years, without providing any facts and evidences rather the recommendation is based on assumptions.
The author begins with that the homes in northern Europe have been traditionally using wood as their major fuel for heating homes and last year due the region experienced below average temperatures and the local weather forecasters throughout the region are predicting that the weather pattern will continue for several years. However, the temperature can vary but we can't be sure whether the people will keep using wood as there major fuel for heating homes. As due to development in technologies we have electric heaters as well so there are chances that the people might start using electric heaters. Also burning wood causes pollution so it will gives rise to problems of air pollution in the region. So local authorities can also ask people to reduce the use of wood as a major fuel for heating, as there are other sources also available. Also due to global warming the weather conditions have mostly become unpredictable so there are chances that the temperature of coming years might be on average level.
Furthermore the author mentions that there has been development of new homes in the region during the past year which might cause demand for wood. But there are no evidences provided whether the newly developed homes will use the tradition system. People can install newly developed system in their new homes. Also burning wood is dangerous not only for the environment but also for the people living in the house. So people building new house would mostly be aware of this fact and they might install Electric heaters or some other source of heating for the house.
Also there is no exact data or a survey conducted to check if the people are still using the traditional method or for the newly developed homes, will they be using the traditional method for heating homes. Also there is no statistical data provided to significantly back the increase of the new home in the region, as for the demand to increase there should be significant increase in the new homes in the region.
As the letter doesn't provide facts and evidences for the recommendation to the client, the client should further check all the necessary facts and should take a survey if required, before investing in Woodchuck industries.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Goof Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 436 350
No. of Characters: 2111 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.57 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.842 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.568 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.894 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.419 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.419 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...owever, the temperature can vary but we cant be sure whether the people will keep us...
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Line 2, column 604, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ple might start using electric heaters. Also burning wood causes pollution so it wil...
^^^^
Line 2, column 650, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...urning wood causes pollution so it will gives rise to problems of air pollution in th...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 844, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...there are other sources also available. Also due to global warming the weather condi...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1011, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... coming years might be on average level. Furthermore the author mentions that the...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ly developed system in their new homes. Also burning wood is dangerous not only for ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 566, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e other source of heating for the house. Also there is no exact data or a survey ...
^^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e traditional method for heating homes. Also there is no statistical data provided t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...increase in the new homes in the region. As the letter doesnt provide facts and e...
^^^
Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ew homes in the region. As the letter doesnt provide facts and evidences for the rec...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 434.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96313364055 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63722134017 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417050691244 0.468620217663 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.118220553 57.8364921388 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.5 119.503703932 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 23.324526521 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312785342399 0.218282227539 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127466901692 0.0743258471296 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866831401556 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176119737198 0.128457276422 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508218414212 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.3799401198 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.3550499002 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.197005988 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 12.3882235529 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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