The following appeared in a memo from the business manager of a chain of cheese stores located throughout the United States."For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however,

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The following appeared in a memo from the business manager of a chain of cheese stores located throughout the United States.

"For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however, all of the five best-selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin. Furthermore, a recent survey by Cheeses of the World magazine indicates an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers. Since our company can reduce expenses by limiting inventory, the best way to improve profits in all of our stores is to discontinue stocking many of our varieties of imported cheese and concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses."

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The argument seems to make several assumptions that, if untrue, would seriously weaken the argument that the stories should discontinue stocking many varieties of imported cheese and concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses.

The biggest assumption the argument makes seems to be on deciding that there should be changes to the stock in domestic and imported cheeses simply because of one new store that opened. The paragraph only states that the five best selling cheeses at the newest store were domestic cheeses. This does not give any information on how well domestic versus imported cheeses sell at other stores. We don’t have information on how many stores this chain has. If there are several stores, one store should not make a difference. In order for the argument to at least hold claim from a superficial level, a significant number of stores needed to have been described as having best selling domestic cheeses. As it is now, if the assumption that this store is significant enough to affect the entire business of the cheeses proves to be false, then discontinuing stock of imported cheeses may prove to be a mistake because it may be that imported cheeses are generating a significant amount of the revenue.

Another assumption the argument makes is in concluding that “best selling domestic cheeses” means “domestic cheeses are generating more revenue.” Perhaps the cheeses are best selling in terms of units sold, but there is no information on the revenue that they generate. Perhaps domestic cheeses are a lot cheaper than imported cheeses and are therefore sold more, but maybe imported cheeses still generate greater revenue. If the assumption that best selling equals most revenue proves to be false, then making the decision to discontinue imported cheeses may prove to be a mistake and would hurt the company overall.

Another piece of the argument that needs to be analyzed further is where the store and cheeses are from. The argument makes the assumption that domestic cheeses are best selling overall and that because of this, the chain should concentrate primarily on stocking domestic cheeses. However, the best selling domestic cheeses are said to be from Wisconsin. Perhaps only the domestic cheeses from Wisconsin are favored, and perhaps aside from these cheeses imported cheeses are a lot more popular than all other domestic cheeses. If this is so and the original assumption is false, it would severely weaken the argument. Furthermore, there is no information on where the newest store is located. It is possible that the reason domestic cheeses from Wisconson are the the five best selling is because the newest store is actually located in Wisconsin. Maybe people from Wisconsin simply want their cheese to be from their own state but other people in other states and other stores do not feel the same way. The argument depends on all the assumptions about domestic cheeses from Wisconsin being sold at the newest store and having a significant impact on the chain’s revenue because, if all of these small assumptions turned out to be false in the ways I illustrated, the argument would not hold.

One of the biggest assumptions the argument makes is related to the survey. It assumes that a recent survey by Cheeses of the World indicating an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers means that the chain’s customers prefer domestic cheeses to imported cheeses as a whole, but that may simply not be true. There is no information on how many people were surveyed, which is a huge flaw in itself since we don’t know if a significant amount of people even responded. If not, then it has no bearing on the argument. It also makes the assumption that subscribers showing an increasing preference actually means that they prefer domestic cheeses to imported cheeses. Perhaps subscribers never really had much enthusiasm for domestic cheeses and that is only recently changing. However, if they were to be asked which cheeses they preferred, they may still say imported. If the assumption that an increasing preference meant a preference over imported turned out to be false, it would weaken the argument. The argument also makes the assumption that the subscribers are in any way related to the chain’s customers. Perhaps only 2% of customers are actually subscribers, which means that the survey results should not impact the company. If the assumption turned out to be false, it would also mean that the survey results should be ignored rather than being accounted for and later hurting the company for their decision.

Even if all of the assumptions I pointed out turned out to be true, perhaps domestic cheeses are best selling due to customers not being fans of the varieties of imported cheeses. Perhaps instead of discontinuing stock of imported cheeses, the chain needs to make sure to stock different varieties of imported cheeses that customers like. Of course, this is assuming that the various assumptions made by the argument were true, but as I pointed out, it is filled with flaws and weaknesses that at any point would undermine the overall argument.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y because of one new store that opened. The paragraph only states that the five bes...
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Line 7, column 761, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...son domestic cheeses from Wisconson are the the five best selling is because the newest...
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Line 7, column 761, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...son domestic cheeses from Wisconson are the the five best selling is because the newest...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... company for their decision. Even if all of the assumptions I pointed out turned out to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, at least, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 58.0 19.6327345309 295% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 32.0 13.6137724551 235% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 28.8173652695 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 55.5748502994 171% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 16.3942115768 220% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4343.0 2260.96107784 192% => OK
No of words: 847.0 441.139720559 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12750885478 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.39474414794 4.56307096286 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71191955628 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 204.123752495 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.319952774498 0.468620217663 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1349.1 705.55239521 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 2.70958083832 443% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 19.7664670659 172% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3125398486 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.735294118 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9117647059 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 6.88822355289 218% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26700903793 0.218282227539 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924872390924 0.0743258471296 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061372924903 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173278471199 0.128457276422 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561049109606 0.0628817314937 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.32208582834 84% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 98.500998004 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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