The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
“During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had 30 percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many accidents is fatigue caused by sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta, we recommend shortening each of our three work shifts by one hour. If we do this, our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The memo of the vice president surmises that the employees of Alta Manufacturing must be allowed extra amount of sleeping hours by decreasing the working shift by one hour. The assertion is based on the assumption that most of the accidents is caused by lack of sleep among workers and Panoply Inductries had 30 percent less accidents due to shorter work shifts which allowed their workers plenty sleep. However, the assumptions are rife with holes and baseless, thus making the recommendation to shorten the work shifts by one hour, a wrong decision. Answering ensuing questions would allow proper evaluation of the recommendation and analyse the efficacy of the argument presented by the vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
The first question that is essential to answer is, how similar are Panoply Industries and Alta Manufacturing in terms of a number of factors such as number of workers, workplace environement, relationship of employees to their bosses and amongst themselves, facilities provided during work, instruments used during work and many more? Identifying the similarities and differences between these two companies would expose the actual causes of accidents in Alta Manufacturing as compared to the other industry; be it the instruments used during work or the working environment itself. It is highly likely that Alta Manufacturing has low standard of instruments and tools, and minimal use of personal protective equipments which would ultimately make their workers more prone to accidents during job. Unless and until these factors are analyzed by comparing them with Panoply Industries, recommendation of shortening of work shifts merely would not be able to reduce the accidents in Alta Manufacturing.
Another imperative question they need to address is whether lack of sleep is the real cause of the accidents in Alta Manufacturing or is there something else which is contributing to the increased number of accidents. The workers themselves might have been far more careless or uneducated about safety protocols during their job consequenlty increasing the rate of on-the-job accidents in Alta Manufacturing compared to its nearby company. There are different aspects of safety during job which needs to be followed properly and being careless in any of those factors might cost a lot to the workers themselves. The nature of the works themselves could be contributing to the higher rate of accidents among the workers; we cannot judge that a painter who paints normal houses is at the same level of safety as the painter who paints a taller building. Furthermore, it could be a mistake from the management in not providing the essential safety equipments to the workers while they are being compelled to work at a high risk. By considering lack of sleep as the only factor, the vice president in limiting the scope of possibilities which might not lead to the result they wish to obtain.
Likewise, the major question of whether decreasing the hours of work shifts would allow the workers to obtain adequate sleep and prevent the accidents is still out there which is extremely critical in justifying the decision made by the vice president. It is not certain that short work shifts would allow the workers to get enough sleep; the employees could potentially utilize those extra time left from their work to have some fun and indulge in recreation or spend their time doing some part time job to earn more income. Additionally, it is also possible that the workers were already having enough sleep and they did not need a short work shift to get a good amount of sleep for themselves. Basically, it is not well recognized whether the workers really wanted a shorter shift for more sleep or not. There is the need to conduct a well rounded study to assess the requirement of workers, or any shortcomings from the part of Alta Manufacturing company to avoid further increment in accidents during job.
In conclusion, the vice president of Alta Manufacturing company needs to assess the facilities, status of workers, and infrastructures available in their own company and observe what factors are affecting the safety of the workers. If it is any shortcomings in terms of infrastructures, education, and trainings, they should be provided to the workers promptly. Finally, a rigorous study to identify whether sleep is a contributing factor in accidents would surely help justidy the recommendation made in the argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun accidents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s and Panoply Inductries had 30 percent less accidents due to shorter work shifts wh...
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Line 7, column 492, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...creation or spend their time doing some part time job to earn more income. Additionally, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, really, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.6327345309 178% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 112.0 55.5748502994 202% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3742.0 2260.96107784 166% => OK
No of words: 722.0 441.139720559 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18282548476 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18363363724 4.56307096286 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97388515411 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 204.123752495 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430747922438 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1169.1 705.55239521 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3322022021 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.090909091 119.503703932 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8181818182 23.324526521 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.70786347227 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302873908159 0.218282227539 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994833680198 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646711475359 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182915318608 0.128457276422 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688148818813 0.0628817314937 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.3799401198 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.3550499002 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 98.500998004 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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