In the given argument, the claim is presented in a manner that does not fully support itself. It rests upon various unwarranted assumptions which need adequate crystallization. The manager of WWAC radio station wishes to switch from the current rock music format to a news and talk format.Although it is a wise approach to adopt to the contemporary music form, still i feel further clarity and information should be offered by the manager to support the claim.
Primarily, a claim has been put forth that there is a decline despite of the increase in population in the listening area. It is completely logical on the radio stations part to think lucidly and take an appropriate measure to beat the decline.Although, the correlation mentioned here in between the decline and change in population genre seems to be unconvincing. There might be a possibility that people in the listening area are not happy with the voice of the DJ.Or there might be a chance that the song list played has become monotonous.Thus, the manager should consider these clauses before changing the format altogether.
Secondly, the decline in local sales has been attributed to limited interest in music. In today's generation, the statement does seem baseless owing to the increasing trend of online music. Now-a-days rather than wasting money on buying a music CD people do prefer to download a music app in their smartphones.Hence, the manager cannot come to a conclusion about people's interests by simply considering the decline in local sales.
In addition, on the basis of the aforementioned void conclusions the manager finally proposes to switch to the news and talk format which has a current soaring popularity.Nonetheless, it cannot be assumed that such a switch would guarantee success to WWAC radio station. Rather, such a step may go the other way round. As the competitors of the radio station use this format, it is highly probable that the station's current listener numbers would decline further.
Conclusively, if the manager of the radio station provided the above mentioned information and elaborated more on the details, his or her proposal could contribute a great deal to gaining a large listener base.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Always put a space after punctuation marks.
Always add a blank line between paragraphs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1805 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.932 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.74 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.087 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.625 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the given argument, the claim is pres...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... music format to a news and talk format.Although it is a wise approach to adopt to the c...
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Line 1, column 338, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ormat.Although it is a wise approach to adopt to the contemporary music form, still i fe...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t to the contemporary music form, still i feel further clarity and information sh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d by the manager to support the claim. Primarily, a claim has been put forth th...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...appropriate measure to beat the decline.Although, the correlation mentioned here in betw...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Or
... are not happy with the voice of the DJ.Or there might be a chance that the song l...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... song list played has become monotonous.Thus, the manager should consider these clau...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...before changing the format altogether. Secondly, the decline in local sales has...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...wnload a music app in their smartphones.Hence, the manager cannot come to a conclusio...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsidering the decline in local sales. In addition, on the basis of the aforeme...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nonetheless
... which has a current soaring popularity.Nonetheless, it cannot be assumed that such a switc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...istener numbers would decline further. Conclusively, if the manager of the radi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 360.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11944444444 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14183121683 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.5700229193 57.8364921388 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.769230769 119.503703932 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 23.324526521 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.70786347227 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283845841578 0.218282227539 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872070192049 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717242998886 0.0701772020484 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138513848656 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431374169083 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 98.500998004 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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