The following appeared in a memorandum from the planning department of an electric power company.
"Several recent surveys indicate that home owners are increasingly eager to conserve energy. At the same time, manufacturers are now marketing many home appliances, such as refrigerators and air conditioners, that are almost twice as energy efficient as those sold a decade ago. Also, new technologies for better home insulation and passive solar heating are readily available to reduce the energy needed for home heating. Therefore, the total demand for electricity in our area will not increase - and may decline slightly. Since our three electric generating plants in operation for the past twenty years have always met our needs, construction of new generating plants will not be necessary.
Since, argument presented by planning department of an electric power company is based on serval assumption which need to corroborated, that demand of electricity will not increase and may decline. Indeed, assumption regarding those need further exegesis, and there is no cornucopia of testimony to justify those conjecture present in the argument. Therefore, it would fatal mistake not to construct new generating power plant. And, eventually lead to energy crisis, which exacerbate energy supply and demand in years to come.
one of putative is that survey indicate that people are keen for conserve energy. However, survey do actually present the real picture of all household, what is the sample size of survey?, what type of economical background people were surveyed. All above question need to answered to known veracious paradigm of the resident energy conservation habit. If not it will be soberly erroneous method to resort for validity of argument. Moreover, subsequent posit is that due to forthcoming of modern technology, it offer several energy conserving electric device like refrigerators, air conditioners than previously available. Apparently, what there is no data given about purchase of such electric saving device, without the data, we don't know about consumers are using how many new device they are using or they didn't replace it with new ones, it would be only naive conjecture that consumers buy's such device as a result of availability in market. likewise, what about the population, is that stagnant, new consumer of power, nothing is mention in the argument. Without such information, it attenuate the validity of argument.
Eventually, further exegesis is needed to before reaching to adjudication. Otherwise, it would be fatal mistake not construct the new generating plants based on the conjecture presented in the argument which eventually lead to compound the energy crisis in coming future due to imbalance in supply and demand of energy.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1626 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.228 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.778 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.548 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.475 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... assumption regarding those need further exegesis, and there is no cornucopia of ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... supply and demand in years to come. one of putative is that survey indicate tha...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gy conservation habit. If not it will be soberly erroneous method to resort for v...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'offers'?
Suggestion: offers
...to forthcoming of modern technology, it offer several energy conserving electric dev...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun energy seems to be countable; consider using: 'several energies'.
Suggestion: several energies
...thcoming of modern technology, it offer several energy conserving electric device like refrig...
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Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dern technology, it offer several energy conserving electric device like refriger...
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Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ric saving device, without the data, we dont know about consumers are using how man...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce, without the data, we dont know about consumers are using how many new device...
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Line 3, column 779, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...know about consumers are using how many new device they are using or they didnt ...
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Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...many new device they are using or they didnt replace it with new ones, it would be o...
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Line 3, column 952, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
... as a result of availability in market. likewise, what about the population, is that sta...
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Line 3, column 1095, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attenuates'?
Suggestion: attenuates
... argument. Without such information, it attenuate the validity of argument. Eventuall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 309.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41100323625 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88572623887 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8564520553 57.8364921388 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.70786347227 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135575803337 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045312422607 0.0743258471296 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488078439497 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834706092437 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486682663134 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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