Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Morden development in techonology allow us to connect all pleople living around goble in fraction of second, with the help internet, social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people become enternet sensation over night throgh social meadial, most people get tempt to be one of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of people, who suceeded. indeed, success defination get morph to some people, people get so mesmerized to prompt and fleeting success, so that they forget "ROMW WAS NOT BUILT IN A DAY". Nonetheless,everybody should remember that every thing is build in pain and slowly,just as tom curise-HOLLYWOOD superstar as many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess anything but over night.Even thoug immediate fame and popularity is tempting fascinating,young people should comply long-term and realistic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendipity.
However, there are meager people who get immediate fame and popularity,for instanc- world final cup match 2014 was played between germany and argentina, only winner goal was scored by
german mid-fielder-mario gortezk to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo messi,who play for argentina and barcelona fc, before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of mild-fielder.so as short viedo of particular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known the particular person.moreover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people become instant celebrity when their viedo get viral after upload in the platform.one the other hand it allure many
young people for same objective, fact is nither of them are not only popular but also sucessful as who follow long term and realistic goal,that is nobody remember dare to remember the german mid-fielder, mario gortez, after that match. lionel messi is stil gobal superstar of football world,some consider him as greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every
maatch and yearing to improve and evole applying one's mind,effort and energy.
Therefore, sports is most quintessential to young people,galvainze onself for enduring and persuing for on term long and realstic objetive rather than forwith fame and popularity whicch is
not meretricious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particular young people should focus to be accomplish to be expert in partiular field of their interest like math, science, technology,
arts and literature etc,which eventually engeder fame and poularity. since picasso and matasie didn't produce their best painting in over night,and leonel messi didn't messi isn't one night
wonder.
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- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 50
- Although innovations such as video computers and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students these technologies all too often distract from real learning 66
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- Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lp internet, social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. App...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, peo...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tik-tok
...a like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people become enternet...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , longing
... most people get tempt to be one of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,t...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...ng for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of people, who suceed...
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Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Indeed
... meager number of people, who suceeded. indeed, success defination get morph to some p...
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Line 1, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...to some people, people get so mesmerized to prompt and fleeting success, so that ...
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Line 1, column 598, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , everybody
...AS NOT BUILT IN A DAY'. Nonetheless,everybody should remember that every thing is bui...
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Line 1, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , just
... every thing is build in pain and slowly,just as tom curise-HOLLYWOOD superstar as ma...
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Line 1, column 733, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , director
...YWOOD superstar as many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess a...
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Line 1, column 750, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , actros
...s many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess anything but ove...
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Line 1, column 805, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Even
...ve their sucess anything but over night.Even thoug immediate fame and popularity is ...
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Line 1, column 869, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , young
...e and popularity is tempting fascinating,young people should comply long-term and real...
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Line 1, column 930, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...comply long-term and realistic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendi...
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Line 1, column 954, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , percive
...listic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendipity. However, there are...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not fleeting,percive as serendipity. However, there are meager people who get...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...le who get immediate fame and popularity,for instanc- world final cup match 2014 was...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rgentina, only winner goal was scored by german mid-fielder-mario gortezk to lift...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
...-fielder-mario gortezk to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse th...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal ...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo mes...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo mes...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...tardom of gobal icon superstar leo messi,who play for argentina and barcelona fc, be...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , before
...argentina and barcelona fc, before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of mild-fielder.so as shor...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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....so as short viedo of particular peolple become dessiminatio over the the interne...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...cular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...cular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , elephant
...pdy known the particular person.moreover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people be...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...reover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people become instant celebrity when th...
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Line 4, column 549, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allures'?
Suggestion: allures
...d in the platform.one the other hand it allure many young people for same objective...
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Line 4, column 560, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...atform.one the other hand it allure many young people for same objective, fact is...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... not only popular but also sucessful as who follow long term and realistic goal,tha...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
... who follow long term and realistic goal,that is nobody remember dare to remember the...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lionel
...ielder, mario gortez, after that match. lionel messi is stil gobal superstar of footba...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...s stil gobal superstar of football world,some consider him as greatest of all time,sc...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , scince
...ome consider him as greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every maatc...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every maatch and yearing t...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...me,scince the focus to perform in every maatch and yearing to improve and evole ...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , effort
... to improve and evole applying ones mind,effort and energy. ...
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Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e applying ones mind,effort and energy. Therefore, sports is most quintessential...
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Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , galvainze
...s is most quintessential to young people,galvainze onself for enduring and persuing for on...
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Line 8, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d persuing for on term long and realstic objetive rather than forwith fame and po...
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Line 8, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...an forwith fame and popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and...
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Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with fame and popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and rama...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , let
...popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particu...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...icious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particular young people should focus to...
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Line 10, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ce, technology, arts and literature etc,which eventually engeder fame and poularity. ...
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Line 10, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
... eventually engeder fame and poularity. since picasso and matasie didnt produce their...
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Line 10, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...nd poularity. since picasso and matasie didnt produce their best painting in over nig...
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Line 10, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...roduce their best painting in over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night...
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Line 10, column 161, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...painting in over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Line 10, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Line 10, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, as to, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84577114428 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57456938931 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624378109453 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 263.484700694 60.3974514979 436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.75 118.986275619 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 23.4991977007 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.21951772744 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 56.0 7.80617977528 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246821254176 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948718765001 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952049633267 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100999521546 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710351946976 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 14.1392134831 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 48.8420337079 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 12.1743820225 207% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 12.1639044944 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lp internet, social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. App...
^^
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, peo...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tik-tok
...a like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people become enternet...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , longing
... most people get tempt to be one of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,t...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ng for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of people, who suceed...
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Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Indeed
... meager number of people, who suceeded. indeed, success defination get morph to some p...
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Line 1, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...to some people, people get so mesmerized to prompt and fleeting success, so that ...
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Line 1, column 598, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , everybody
...AS NOT BUILT IN A DAY'. Nonetheless,everybody should remember that every thing is bui...
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Line 1, column 669, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , just
... every thing is build in pain and slowly,just as tom curise-HOLLYWOOD superstar as ma...
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Line 1, column 733, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , director
...YWOOD superstar as many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess a...
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Line 1, column 750, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , actros
...s many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess anything but ove...
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Line 1, column 805, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Even
...ve their sucess anything but over night.Even thoug immediate fame and popularity is ...
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Line 1, column 869, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , young
...e and popularity is tempting fascinating,young people should comply long-term and real...
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Line 1, column 930, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...comply long-term and realistic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendi...
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Line 1, column 954, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , percive
...listic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendipity. However, there are...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not fleeting,percive as serendipity. However, there are meager people who get...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...le who get immediate fame and popularity,for instanc- world final cup match 2014 was...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rgentina, only winner goal was scored by german mid-fielder-mario gortezk to lift...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
...-fielder-mario gortezk to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse th...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal ...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo mes...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo mes...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...tardom of gobal icon superstar leo messi,who play for argentina and barcelona fc, be...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , before
...argentina and barcelona fc, before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of mild-fielder.so as shor...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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....so as short viedo of particular peolple become dessiminatio over the the interne...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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Suggestion: the
...cular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...cular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , elephant
...pdy known the particular person.moreover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people be...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...reover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people become instant celebrity when th...
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Line 4, column 549, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allures'?
Suggestion: allures
...d in the platform.one the other hand it allure many young people for same objective...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atform.one the other hand it allure many young people for same objective, fact is...
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... not only popular but also sucessful as who follow long term and realistic goal,tha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
... who follow long term and realistic goal,that is nobody remember dare to remember the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lionel
...ielder, mario gortez, after that match. lionel messi is stil gobal superstar of footba...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...s stil gobal superstar of football world,some consider him as greatest of all time,sc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , scince
...ome consider him as greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every maatc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every maatch and yearing t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me,scince the focus to perform in every maatch and yearing to improve and evole ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , effort
... to improve and evole applying ones mind,effort and energy. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e applying ones mind,effort and energy. Therefore, sports is most quintessential...
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Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , galvainze
...s is most quintessential to young people,galvainze onself for enduring and persuing for on...
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Line 8, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d persuing for on term long and realstic objetive rather than forwith fame and po...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an forwith fame and popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with fame and popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and rama...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , let
...popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particu...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...icious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particular young people should focus to...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ce, technology, arts and literature etc,which eventually engeder fame and poularity. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
... eventually engeder fame and poularity. since picasso and matasie didnt produce their...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...nd poularity. since picasso and matasie didnt produce their best painting in over nig...
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Line 10, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...roduce their best painting in over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...painting in over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, as to, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84577114428 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57456938931 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624378109453 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 263.484700694 60.3974514979 436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.75 118.986275619 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 23.4991977007 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.21951772744 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 56.0 7.80617977528 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246821254176 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948718765001 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952049633267 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100999521546 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710351946976 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 14.1392134831 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 48.8420337079 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 12.1743820225 207% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 12.1639044944 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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