In the newspaper editorial,author stated that autonomy of a country only depends on depends on it's border strength.As unchecked illegal immigrants endangered the economy and national security.He also recommended that country should take every possible steps to return those immigrants to their origin country.His conclusion is based on some fallacious assumption,which is totally weaken the argument.
Firstly,author assumed border's strength is the only factor of calculating autonomous nature of any country.But a country' autonomy power is also depends on country's political situation, situation handling power and human resources.To strengthen border, nation need a great human force and also modern amenities.If nation uses all it's money on border then it may have no money to rule the country autonomously.In this case, he have to get help from other country and then those country may imply some condition which will weaken the nation's autonomic power.
Secondly,he assumed that immigrants always weaken country's economical power.But his assumption does not seem logical as he does not provide any statistical data to bolster his point.In many country, immigrant business man not only made their own profit but also provide a great monetary help to nation as tax and also emerge as a giant job pool.Moreover, immigrant workers sometimes is cheaper than country's worker.In those cases, immigrants actually bolster country's economy.
Additionally,he assumed that illegal immigrants pose threats to those countries.But again he fails to provide convincing data reports.Country men can also poses threats against the country.
As, a conclusion,authors unwarranted argument seems only xenophobic reaction which is based on some falsely assumed points.
So his recommendation to take effort to swipe out immigrants can give negative image of that nation to the world.It will never help the nation to be stronger and wealthier,this recommendation will never lead a nation to gate ultimate autonomy but may forced some extremist vibes to other juxtapose countries.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274626865672 0.25644967241 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.161194029851 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122388059701 0.0836205057962 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0746268656716 0.0520304965353 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388059701493 0.0272364105082 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0686567164179 0.125424944231 55% => OK
Participles: 0.0149253731343 0.0416121511921 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.2107664717 2.79052419416 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0417910447761 0.026700313972 157% => OK
Particles: 0.00298507462687 0.001811407834 165% => OK
Determiners: 0.0955223880597 0.113004496875 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268656716418 0.0255425247493 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0089552238806 0.0127820249294 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2070.0 2731.13054187 76% => OK
No of words: 308.0 446.07635468 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.72077922078 6.12365571057 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.441558441558 0.378187486979 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.36038961039 0.287650121315 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253246753247 0.208842608468 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.175324675325 0.135150697306 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2107664717 2.79052419416 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 207.018472906 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.469332199767 123% => OK
Word variations: 62.7030011072 52.1807786196 120% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.039408867 30% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 51.3333333333 23.2022227129 221% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 152.287009733 57.7814097925 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.0 141.986410481 243% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.3333333333 23.2022227129 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.724660767414 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 3.58251231527 754% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 87.3722943723 51.9672348444 168% => OK
Elegance: 1.30434782609 1.8405768891 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324336312734 0.441005458295 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15898475306 0.135418324435 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131298912323 0.0829849096947 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.26623325918e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179983967068 0.193483328276 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12859184756 0.0970749176394 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.162338121539 0.42659136922 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.133911813367 0.0774707102158 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179983967068 0.312017818177 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12859184756 0.0698173142475 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 14.657635468 41% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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