The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants.
"Butter has now been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. Only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers cannot distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine. Thus, to avoid the expense of purchasing butter and to increase profitability, the Happy Pancake House should extend this cost-saving change to its restaurants in the southeast and northeast as well."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
In this argument, the author concludes that using the margarine to exchange the butter had little impact on the customers. To justify this conclusion, the author points out that only 2 percent of the customers complained and many people were reported even haven't notice the displacement. I find it unpersuasive on several grounds.
Although just 2 percent of the consumers complained about the margarine, unfortunately, the author does not provide enough information to strengthen the validity and integrity of their conclusion. we can not know for sure that how they collect their statistics that, in all likelihood, possibly be chose by the restaurant carefully, which couldn't entirely reflect the truly result. In addition, even it is certainly just 2% people don't like this change, the author can not ensure that maybe a large part of the consumers complained about this in mind and just kindness or don't want some other troubling investments that would destroy their quiet lives, which engender the result that lots of people don't perfer to say it loud but, more probably, talk to their friends and faminlies. As a result, the restaurants can not receive many bad ideas from the customer. Accordingly, the author should present a deeply and thoroughly research to help diminish these assumptions.
In addition, this argument reveals the evidence that the complaints also didn't exist in number of the respondings of the customers from the servers report. Nevertheless, the servers report can be doubtful. For instance, the author fails to account for the possibility that servers have belies some of the blame for if they tell the truth, they may afraid of being cut off by the employer because of their uneffacious behavior couldn't lead to profitability in this company, which, be more seriously, they couldn't find a more lucrative occupation after being laid off. Therefore, they might give up the varacity of the survey for the stability of their job. So, to boost his or her argument, only thing the author could do is to find another institutions to make a validate and acceptable survey.
On the ground of the assumption of the manager of Happy Pancake House, the argument makes an unfair assumption that the margarine had little impact on customers. However, this statement can be truly unwarranted for the some reasons. The margarine may have some other influences that the consumers can not even know by themselves. From the author, we could not exclude the possibility that these customers may suffer from some serious diseases after years of consuming of the margarine before knowing that this replacement can be harmful towards their health. if the author does not afford accurate information discussed above, the logical lines would be probably unreliable for the purpose of drawing any conclusion.
In sum, the assertion is untenable in the light of the veracity and validity of the arguably survey, the author have to eliminate all the possibilities about the investigator and the customer declared above.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 500 350
No. of Characters: 2479 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.729 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.958 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.719 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 101 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.412 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.494 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... percent of the customers complained and many people were reported even havent no...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ned and many people were reported even havent notice the displacement. I find it unpe...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...dity and integrity of their conclusion. we can not know for sure that how they col...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: couldn't
...hose by the restaurant carefully, which couldnt entirely reflect the truly result. In a...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...on, even it is certainly just 2% people dont like this change, the author can not en...
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Line 5, column 573, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...about this in mind and just kindness or dont want some other troubling investments t...
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Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...engender the result that lots of people dont perfer to say it loud but, more probab...
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Line 5, column 704, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nder the result that lots of people dont perfer to say it loud but, more probably...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s the evidence that the complaints also didnt exist in number of the respondings of t...
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Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
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Suggestion: some
...he possibility that servers have belies some of the blame for if they tell the truth, they ...
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Line 9, column 427, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: couldn't
...r because of their uneffacious behavior couldnt lead to profitability in this company, ...
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Line 9, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...company, which, be more seriously, they couldnt find a more lucrative occupation after ...
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Line 9, column 762, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
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...is to find another institutions to make a validate and acceptable survey. On the grou...
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Line 13, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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...tement can be truly unwarranted for the some reasons. The margarine may have some ot...
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Line 13, column 560, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...nt can be harmful towards their health. if the author does not afford accurate inf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 28.8173652695 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 55.5748502994 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2556.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 492.0 441.139720559 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7905630645 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 204.123752495 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 705.55239521 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.22255489022 213% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2992243435 57.8364921388 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.526315789 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8947368421 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.70786347227 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100993245333 0.218282227539 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343823887965 0.0743258471296 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371191838897 0.0701772020484 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06293539629 0.128457276422 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307262705943 0.0628817314937 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 98.500998004 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.