The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
While it may seem that by restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level, news channel will be able to attract more viewers and avoid losing further advertising revenues.
It is stated that most of the complaints were concerned with station's coverage of weather and local news,but there is no mention of total number of complaints. Maybe the total number of the complaints for news channel is in paucity, so these are the views of few people.
Moreover, it is never mentioned what is written in the complaints. Maybe people want to see local and weather news for even lesser amount of time. Or people want to see news relating to some specific locations in thier locality. There could have been some fault regarding weather or local news news coverage,which might have irate people leading them to write complaints regarding the same.
Furthermore, Information is not sufficient for analysis. Local advertisers could have canceled advertising contracts with most of news channels during late-night show, as there is less number of viewers during late night.
Additonally, the complaints could have been from a specific month.There could be some local sports tournament or carnival going on in city during that time period.
So without complete information, it can not be concluded that by restoring time devoted to weather and local news, news channel will be able to restore its viewers and revenue to former level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...tions coverage of weather and local news,but there is no mention of total number of ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: news
...n some fault regarding weather or local news news coverage,which might have irate people ...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ding weather or local news news coverage,which might have irate people leading them to...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...s could have been from a specific month.There could be some local sports tournament o...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...pecific month.There could be some local sports tournament or carnival going on in city...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 441.139720559 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12605042017 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6517631933 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 204.123752495 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521008403361 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 705.55239521 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7449694288 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344859125027 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130667333421 0.0743258471296 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809366266859 0.0701772020484 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183695861259 0.128457276422 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344833070757 0.0628817314937 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.