The business manager has analysed that by restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level to overcome the complaints received from viewers regarding the station's coverage of weather and local news.At the first glance this analysis and recommended solultion looks compelling but on further observation of the memorandum it can be said that this spurious information consists a lot of fallacies due to certain assumptions and dearth of facts.
Firstly the memorandum states that most of the complaints were regarding coverage of local and weather news.But we have no further information regarding the content of these complaints.It can be possible that the viewers are doubting the veracity of information provided by the station or they are not happy with the overall facts provided under this category.Had we known the facts circumventing these complaints we would have had a better lucid picture of the scenario.
Also we are told that the complaints were received during this period,but this doesnt directly imply that the viewers are not satisfied with the late night program.There are chances that the viewers are not happy with the overall coverage of the station and reporting the same at the end of the day when they get free from their busy schedules.In such a scenario the claim becomes void as the viewers have concerns with the overall coverage of weather and local news and not only late-night programs. If we had known that these complaints have a direct relation with the late night coverage timings or had the details of the complaint to juxtapox whether its quality issue that the viewers are facing or something else ; this assumption would have been more tractable.
In addition to this, we know that the local businesses that used to advertise with them have canceled their contracts..There would be steps required to restore the weather and local news coverage in the absence of former local-businesses.We do not have information regarding the approach to combat this situation
Moreover, the manager is assuming that by restoring the time devoted to these news to its former level they would attract more viewers.We have no statistics or survey results on the basis of which we can decide whether this restoration is the need of the viewers and by doing so the program would have more viewers.
The memorandum consists dearth of factual information regarding the content of complaints, whether this complaints are directly related to the late-night news program,the measures decided to be taken to replace the local-businesses.Apart from this it relies on assumptiion that restoring former timing would attract more viewres.Having said that this argument is weak due to faalc
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station."Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaint 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...nts received from viewers regarding the stations coverage of weather and local news.At t...
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Suggestion: At
...ions coverage of weather and local news.At the first glance this analysis and reco...
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...n be said that this spurious information consists a lot of fallacies due to certa...
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Suggestion: But
...ding coverage of local and weather news.But we have no further information regardin...
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...garding the content of these complaints.It can be possible that the viewers are do...
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Suggestion: Had
...rall facts provided under this category.Had we known the facts circumventing these ...
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...plaints were received during this period,but this doesnt directly imply that the vie...
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...re received during this period,but this doesnt directly imply that the viewers are not...
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...t satisfied with the late night program.There are chances that the viewers are not ha...
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...they get free from their busy schedules.In such a scenario the claim becomes void ...
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... with them have canceled their contracts..There would be steps required to restore...
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...ng the approach to combat this situation Moreover, the manager is assuming that b...
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...r level they would attract more viewers.We have no statistics or survey results on...
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...ding the content of complaints, whether this complaints are directly related to the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'apart from', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242825607064 0.25644967241 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.192052980132 0.15541462614 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0927152317881 0.0836205057962 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353200883002 0.0520304965353 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0397350993377 0.0272364105082 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12582781457 0.125424944231 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0640176600442 0.0416121511921 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93681347398 2.79052419416 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331125827815 0.026700313972 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.150110375276 0.113004496875 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198675496689 0.0255425247493 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00662251655629 0.0127820249294 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2748.0 2731.13054187 101% => OK
No of words: 441.0 446.07635468 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23129251701 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362811791383 0.378187486979 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319727891156 0.287650121315 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213151927438 0.208842608468 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131519274376 0.135150697306 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93681347398 2.79052419416 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 207.018472906 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437641723356 0.469332199767 93% => OK
Word variations: 47.8474640898 52.1807786196 92% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.039408867 30% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 73.5 23.2022227129 317% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 109.698703527 57.7814097925 190% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 458.0 141.986410481 323% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 23.2022227129 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 0.724660767414 253% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.58251231527 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 105.472789116 51.9672348444 203% => OK
Elegance: 1.61983471074 1.8405768891 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539145459598 0.441005458295 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.424679722147 0.135418324435 314% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0639901017778 0.0829849096947 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.954831023778 0.58762219726 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0857674327504 0.147661913831 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.382775445553 0.193483328276 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900643957941 0.0970749176394 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472519491105 0.42659136922 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105768368691 0.0774707102158 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.390513063229 0.312017818177 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659240541728 0.0698173142475 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 14.657635468 41% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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