The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine:
“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The author states the opinion by giving three facts :(1) Manned space flight is costly and dangerous (2) there is sign of success in using unmanned space probes (3) the reduce in cost and risk with sending humans into space thus investing resource in unmanned probes . All these facts seems to be logical first glance . But when looked intricately , the author tends to overlook certain vital points which could weaken the facts mentioned above.
Firstly, the author stated that manned space flight is costly and dangerous , which can be considered as the truth to certain extent. But the author fails to mention why manned space is costly and dangerous? Are they not putting enough efforts in replacing the costly equipments with reusable or are they not trying to ameliorate the dangerous consequences faced by humans when in space? He doesn't provide the cogent explanation for this problem.
Secondly, the author has mentioned that using unmanned space probes and satellites have been proved to be successful as the information collected by this probes is considered to be useful. But author doesn't give any evidence that the for what purpose was this probes used and moreover what is was the information they conceived was it a limited one as in confined to particular query or was it a generalized one which can be useful for many purpose. the author can't provide evidence for that.
Thirdly, the author mentions the cost and risk associated with using manned space flight, which can be true. But how can the author be sure about cost associated with unmanned probes as it can more than manned ones. The risk associated with human beings will surely be reduced , what if the machine meets with failure there might be chances of loss. The information collected by probes if proved to be spurious then this might led to increase in cost and wastage of resources involved in this process.
Thus the facts provided by the author are proved to be ill-founded . the arguments can be strengthened if the author had provided sufficient information regarding various aspects involved by doing proper survey would have helped . But for now the authenticity of the information based on the data mentioned ,falls flat.
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- The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine:“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great 57
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uccess in using unmanned space probes 3 the reduce in cost and risk with sending humans in...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...us investing resource in unmanned probes . All these facts seems to be logical fir...
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Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e facts seems to be logical first glance . But when looked intricately , the autho...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rst glance . But when looked intricately , the author tends to overlook certain vi...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ned space flight is costly and dangerous , which can be considered as the truth to...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ences faced by humans when in space? He doesnt provide the cogent explanation for this...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...cessful as the information collected by this probes is considered to be useful. But ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... is considered to be useful. But author doesnt give any evidence that the for what pur...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... was this probes used and moreover what is was the information they conceived was ...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...s this probes used and moreover what is was the information they conceived was it a...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the information they conceived was it a limited one as in confined to particular...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun purpose seems to be countable; consider using: 'many purposes'.
Suggestion: many purposes
...generalized one which can be useful for many purpose. the author cant provide evidence for t...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e which can be useful for many purpose. the author cant provide evidence for that. ...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... be useful for many purpose. the author cant provide evidence for that. Thirdly, ...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with human beings will surely be reduced , what if the machine meets with failure ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... resources involved in this process. Thus the facts provided by the author are pr...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the author are proved to be ill-founded . the arguments can be strengthened if th...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e author are proved to be ill-founded . the arguments can be strengthened if the au...
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Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...by doing proper survey would have helped . But for now the authenticity of the inf...
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Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... information based on the data mentioned ,falls flat.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208121827411 0.25644967241 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.220812182741 0.15541462614 142% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106598984772 0.0836205057962 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0279187817259 0.0520304965353 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0177664974619 0.0272364105082 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11421319797 0.125424944231 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0888324873096 0.0416121511921 213% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.5402319592 2.79052419416 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0279187817259 0.026700313972 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0989847715736 0.113004496875 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0279187817259 0.0255425247493 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0279187817259 0.0127820249294 218% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2215.0 2731.13054187 81% => OK
No of words: 376.0 446.07635468 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89095744681 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.57801047555 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.378187486979 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226063829787 0.287650121315 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164893617021 0.208842608468 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103723404255 0.135150697306 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5402319592 2.79052419416 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 207.018472906 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476063829787 0.469332199767 101% => OK
Word variations: 50.2790329743 52.1807786196 96% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1176470588 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5918781786 57.7814097925 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.294117647 141.986410481 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.724660767414 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.58251231527 558% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.7240300375 51.9672348444 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.54285714286 1.8405768891 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451725426278 0.441005458295 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146875603054 0.135418324435 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0920330343229 0.0829849096947 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.586710089621 0.58762219726 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145988683681 0.147661913831 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188760180697 0.193483328276 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105268284573 0.0970749176394 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385943391197 0.42659136922 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0389343533777 0.0774707102158 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309041874268 0.312017818177 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642764537029 0.0698173142475 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.