The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
The author claims that the number of people attended Super Screen produced movies is decresed last year not by the quality of the movies but the lack of public advertising.
Firstlly,the number of people attending Super Screen produced movies reduced doesn't mean that people watched other movies in large scale in previous year.It may occured that the taste of passing leisure was shifted from movies to other things.So to justify the actual claim,the survey of people about watching any movies will be need.
The critic reviews about Super Screen produced movies was good.But it can not be said that the movies of other production houses were less attarctive and enjoyable.People may watched other production house movies that that were more acceptable to them that reduced the number for the Super Screen company.
The author also claim that the people were not aware about their movies.But it is an asummption of the author.He has no surveing data about that rather he just make an assumption considering other critearia.It may happened that people knew about their movies but the genre of the movies could not fullfill the taste of the people.So these claim can not a valid reason for allocating a larger share of budget for next year.
Before allocating a greater share of budget in advertisng, it is need to be justified that the lack of advertising was responsible for the reduction of number of the people attending Super Screen movies.So the recommendation of the author may not valid because having many doubt and lack of proper surveying data.Finally it can be said thet the argument is not reasonable.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 281 350
No. of Characters: 1324 1500
No. of Different Words: 127 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.094 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.712 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.333 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 56.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.829 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.622 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.37 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he quality of the movies but the lack of public advertising. Firstlly,the numbe...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... lack of public advertising. Firstlly,the number of people attending Super Screen...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e attending Super Screen produced movies reduced doesnt mean that people watched ...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...g Super Screen produced movies reduced doesnt mean that people watched other movies i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... movies in large scale in previous year.It may occured that the taste of passing l...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...was shifted from movies to other things.So to justify the actual claim,the survey ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...er things.So to justify the actual claim,the survey of people about watching any mov...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...t Super Screen produced movies was good.But it can not be said that the movies of o...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...uses were less attarctive and enjoyable.People may watched other production house movi...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that that were more acceptable to them that reduced the number for the Super Sc...
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Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reen company. The author also claim that the people were not aware about the...
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Line 11, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...eople were not aware about their movies.But it is an asummption of the author.He ha...
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Line 11, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...s.But it is an asummption of the author.He has no surveing data about that rather ...
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Line 11, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... assumption considering other critearia.It may happened that people knew about the...
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Line 11, column 332, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ld not fullfill the taste of the people.So these claim can not a valid reason for ...
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Line 15, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...he people attending Super Screen movies.So the recommendation of the author may no...
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Line 15, column 269, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun doubt seems to be countable; consider using: 'many doubts'.
Suggestion: many doubts
...the author may not valid because having many doubt and lack of proper surveying data.Final...
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Line 15, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...doubt and lack of proper surveying data.Finally it can be said thet the argument is not...
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Line 15, column 314, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...doubt and lack of proper surveying data.Finally it can be said thet the argument is not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 2260.96107784 60% => OK
No of words: 268.0 441.139720559 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08582089552 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61880760338 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 204.123752495 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481343283582 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0556958213 57.8364921388 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 272.6 119.503703932 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 23.324526521 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.70786347227 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284371850395 0.218282227539 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18664217174 0.0743258471296 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895203973644 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18664217174 0.128457276422 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895203973644 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 14.3799401198 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 48.3550499002 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.197005988 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.32208582834 118% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 98.500998004 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 12.3882235529 137% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.9071856287 193% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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