"The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
In order to support conclusion auther come up with certain edidences.However in deeper excrutly it is revealed that non of the evidances lend credible support to conclusion.
Firstly auther mension about recent marketing report of his company which provide super screen movies.The report cshows increment of viewer of super screen movies since past year.But he cannot show a legit data of report by how much percent.
secondly he assume that percentage of viewer is not that much he expected because of lack of knowledge in people , which is a false assumption of auther.constant percent might be due to quality of super screen movies.
lastly auther come up with conclusion to increase budget for next year for advertising about super screen movies.But that does not mean that by watching advertisemnet people will show interest in his company.it could be a reason that people are not interested in super screen movies.
so it can be conclude that auther has failed to claim his conclusion due to lack appropriate data.
- "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition." 50
- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerne 33
- "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies 33
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 2260.96107784 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 441.139720559 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22754491018 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84993510488 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 204.123752495 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.468620217663 128% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 705.55239521 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.764321075 57.8364921388 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.6 119.503703932 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 23.324526521 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.70786347227 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200451776722 0.218282227539 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993613707511 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991621912999 0.0701772020484 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993613707511 0.128457276422 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991621912999 0.0628817314937 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.3799401198 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32208582834 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 98.500998004 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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