human lives
This argument mainly concern with human lives. Here author argu that we can save human lives by using their suggestion. As we know todays technology goes on absord extend there are many facillites are provided for saving human lives as well as we can use all the orthodox tricks for curing the disease.
Firstly,author said we can saved human lives if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered.And this administered take place in areas where the disease is detected.So we have to administered routinely against the innoculations.
Secondly, the data said that if we support inoculations there is small possibilites that a person will die as a result of inoculations. This is main disadvatage of supporting inoculations.So we have to take some step against thar inoculations because this cost life of human beings.
Thirdly, as we know that by supporting inoculations there is some chances that some people will lost their lives. So we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to routinely administered. By doing this we can save lives of human beings and which is more neccesary than regular administration.
concludely, we can say that by using today's all technologies we can also save human lives. we have not give permition to inoculations and this is the optimum way to save human lives rather than routinely administered.We can also doing this thing by taking support of all NGO and all health center which are visited disease area oftenly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , author
...ricks for curing the disease. Firstly,author said we can saved human lives if inocul...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
... disease. Firstly,author said we can saved human lives if inoculations against cow...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...nst cow flu were routinely administered.And this administered take place in areas w...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... in areas where the disease is detected.So we have to administered routinely again...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... disadvatage of supporting inoculations.So we have to take some step against thar ...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some chances'?
Suggestion: there are some chances
...we know that by supporting inoculations there is some chances that some people will lost their lives....
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...e is some chances that some people will lost their lives. So we cannot permit inocul...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Concludely
...ccesary than regular administration. concludely, we can say that by using todays all te...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...hnologies we can also save human lives. we have not give permition to inoculations...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
... can also save human lives. we have not give permition to inoculations and this is t...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...ives rather than routinely administered.We can also doing this thing by taking sup...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...than routinely administered.We can also doing this thing by taking support of all NGO...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2265625 0.25644967241 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.1796875 0.15541462614 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859375 0.0836205057962 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.07421875 0.0520304965353 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.05859375 0.0272364105082 215% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.13671875 0.125424944231 109% => OK
Participles: 0.05078125 0.0416121511921 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10916107376 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.01953125 0.026700313972 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.08203125 0.113004496875 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0390625 0.0255425247493 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01171875 0.0127820249294 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1472.0 2731.13054187 54% => OK
No of words: 239.0 446.07635468 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1589958159 6.12365571057 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.57801047555 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317991631799 0.378187486979 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225941422594 0.287650121315 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163179916318 0.208842608468 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138075313808 0.135150697306 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10916107376 2.79052419416 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 207.018472906 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518828451883 0.469332199767 111% => OK
Word variations: 48.3929002257 52.1807786196 93% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.039408867 55% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7272727273 23.2022227129 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7806157241 57.7814097925 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 141.986410481 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 23.2022227129 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.724660767414 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.58251231527 335% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.3214149867 51.9672348444 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.325 1.8405768891 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263003576501 0.441005458295 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132770691438 0.135418324435 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759727493247 0.0829849096947 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.652104067848 0.58762219726 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190043197518 0.147661913831 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160767072124 0.193483328276 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119158984923 0.0970749176394 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31658064609 0.42659136922 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.09381273176 0.0774707102158 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18663977115 0.312017818177 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966181483835 0.0698173142475 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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