An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
The argument conclude that Some type of deficiency provide to the millet have more vitamin A ans compare to before.This type of miller very high cost in market so Government provide the subsidies to the farmers for the produce the verities of the millet.Millet is Already staple food in tegus,people have adopt the new verities of millet so government also to this people for producing the different type of millet.In this argument have so many assumption and holes showing so i disagree for this argue.
Firstly,Author suggest the new type of millet have more vitamin A so Government of tegus attract because most of the production of millet produce in the tegus so it will promote the people for produce the different type of millet but it not show this type of millet have more the deficiency give.So it is not showing in this argue after produce it can be sell or not in very high price and it can not suggest the this is more re able or not?
In this argue farmer can adopt this type of production but but it is not suggest the our land are liable for this production if we can produce in this type of land so money and millets are produce or not.
Secondly,Author says that in international market have more demands of millet of very high vitamin A.So farmer have more produce and get the money is high.So government provide and encourage the farmers for production new type of millets and more profit available before it can be produce old millets.
Some farmers are not showing the future and it will attract the no of ads but it cannot judge our self and not showing our land condition we can produce or not this type of millets on showing the profits is more show i can produce this time new millets. It will not show the future it produce or not?
Therefore I conclude that Any land produce the same millets in dozen years so it will not be any risk take for the new type of millets produce because it is not sure this type of millets are produce after some no of day.It will be guess the future if we can produce this new millet so we can get more profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'concludes'.
Suggestion: concludes
The argument conclude that Some type of deficiency provide to...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ve more vitamin A ans compare to before.This type of miller very high cost in market...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Millet
... the produce the verities of the millet.Millet is Already staple food in tegus,people ...
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Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...t.Millet is Already staple food in tegus,people have adopt the new verities of millet s...
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Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'adopted'.
Suggestion: adopted
...lready staple food in tegus,people have adopt the new verities of millet so governmen...
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Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...erities of millet so government also to this people for producing the different type...
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Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... producing the different type of millet.In this argument have so many assumption a...
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Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'many assumptions'.
Suggestion: many assumptions
...type of millet.In this argument have so many assumption and holes showing so i disagree for thi...
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Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...so many assumption and holes showing so i disagree for this argue. Firstly,Aut...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Author
...so i disagree for this argue. Firstly,Author suggest the new type of millet have mor...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...the different type of millet but it not show this type of millet have more the defic...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...of millet have more the deficiency give.So it is not showing in this argue after p...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
... very high price and it can not suggest the this is more re able or not? In this argu...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: but
...armer can adopt this type of production but but it is not suggest the our land are liab...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suggested'.
Suggestion: suggested
...is type of production but but it is not suggest the our land are liable for this produc...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...of production but but it is not suggest the our land are liable for this production if ...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Author
... millets are produce or not. Secondly,Author says that in international market have ...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...emands of millet of very high vitamin A.So farmer have more produce and get the mo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... more produce and get the money is high.So government provide and encourage the fa...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...wing the future and it will attract the no of ads but it cannot judge our self and...
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Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ets on showing the profits is more show i can produce this time new millets. It w...
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Line 9, column 286, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'produces'?
Suggestion: produces
...millets. It will not show the future it produce or not? Therefore I conclude that An...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...t show the future it produce or not? Therefore I conclude that Any land produce the sa...
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Line 11, column 64, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
...at Any land produce the same millets in dozen years so it will not be any risk take f...
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Line 11, column 211, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... type of millets are produce after some no of day.It will be guess the future if w...
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Line 11, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...illets are produce after some no of day.It will be guess the future if we can prod...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.25644967241 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.146464646465 0.15541462614 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0836205057962 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0656565656566 0.0520304965353 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0530303030303 0.0272364105082 195% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.136363636364 0.125424944231 109% => OK
Participles: 0.020202020202 0.0416121511921 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.41272797273 2.79052419416 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010101010101 0.026700313972 38% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118686868687 0.113004496875 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0378787878788 0.0255425247493 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0127820249294 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2077.0 2731.13054187 76% => OK
No of words: 382.0 446.07635468 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43717277487 6.12365571057 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287958115183 0.378187486979 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222513089005 0.287650121315 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0916230366492 0.208842608468 44% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0680628272251 0.135150697306 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41272797273 2.79052419416 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 207.018472906 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.316753926702 0.469332199767 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 33.6324768524 52.1807786196 64% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.039408867 35% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 54.5714285714 23.2022227129 235% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 139.805696068 57.7814097925 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.714285714 141.986410481 209% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.5714285714 23.2022227129 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.724660767414 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 3.58251231527 726% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 76.822737472 51.9672348444 148% => OK
Elegance: 1.61904761905 1.8405768891 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39655149634 0.441005458295 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.408312727221 0.135418324435 302% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0992518468543 0.0829849096947 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.944154236274 0.58762219726 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122576384822 0.147661913831 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.249035799403 0.193483328276 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126018885347 0.0970749176394 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432609619908 0.42659136922 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128153467126 0.0774707102158 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281096404658 0.312017818177 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103712297898 0.0698173142475 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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