An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The primary responsibility of the government is to ensure the well being of its citizens. The current issue faced by the impoverished country of Tagus is a nutrient deficiency namely Vitamin A , in its population . International organisations always pitch in to help with humanitarian work . Thus an NGO has developed modified seeds that produce millet which contain high amount of Vitamin A . It remains questionable if only promoting this new millet will help Tagus combat the nutrient deficiency issue among its people
Firstly , such a deficiency is a pressing matter for any state . Growing new millet grains is a long term solution. As mentioned by the author , first we need to convince the framer and then convince the citizens to switch to the new grain . Even if all this is achieved ,it will take a long time for results to show. Thus the government should also look for some other alternative solutions for this exigency.
Also it is not mention to what extent is the population affected with such a deficiency. If it is an issue faced by a small fraction of the the population or a notable size of the population is affected by this ? . If its in a particular area for a smaller population , the problem can be solved with the balanced diet approach.Deficiency of any kind is a result of poor diet . Government should promote healthy and balanced diet awareness campaigns. Vegetables like carrot are a good source of Vitamin A. Survey could be conducted to evaluate the cultivation and consumption of Vitamin A rich vegetables in the region and accordingly those foods could be promoted or exported if needed.
Secondly , being an impoverished state the costly seeds may be difficult to acquire and cultivate by the farmers. Government needs to ensure that the farmers are aware of the methods and techniques of cultivation of the new grains . The subsidy promised should also effectively reach the poor farmers. Corruption and other factors and can lead to ineffective implementation of the scheme . The worst hit in this case will be the farmer who may be burdened by debt. Thus leading to failure of scheme and reverting to normal crops .
Thirdly , the people also have to be convinced to the use the new grains in their regular diet. There may be apprehensions regarding mass consumption of the modified new grains. It may vary in taste and not appeal to many. The cooking time of this new grain may also be longer , using up more fuel. The people will be under more financial stress from the purchase of this grain . The aforementioned reasons can deter the public from using the modified grains
The consumption of the grain should have a positive effect on the health of the citizens . It should supply the essential nutrient in adequate quantity.Before launching a massive campaign to promote the new grains , a scientific study can be conducted to verify this conclusion . Government should use resources and money collected from its people as taxes responsibly .Since monetary resources are scarce maximum benefit should be the motto here.
The government should think of all the people in the society before launching such ambitious schemes. Effective implementation and massive awareness programs need to supplement the production and distribution of the new grains .Besides this also we have the open questions regarding the scientific viability of the entire program. We should keep in mind the actual agenda "to combat Vitamin A deficiency " as the primary goal .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.9520958084 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 55.5748502994 137% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 16.3942115768 152% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2910.0 2260.96107784 129% => OK
No of words: 578.0 441.139720559 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03460207612 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94238385736 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 204.123752495 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463667820069 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 918.0 705.55239521 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 19.7664670659 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9106532946 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03125 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.25449101796 952% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.20758483034 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321017727984 0.218282227539 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769192179601 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640982413576 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154591318405 0.128457276422 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836636448146 0.0628817314937 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 98.500998004 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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