In Megalopolis, the number of law school graduates who went to work for large, corporate firms declined by 15 percent over the last three years, whereas an increasing number of graduates took jobs at small, general practice firms. Even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries, law school graduates are choosing to work for the smaller firms most likely because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. In a survey of first-year students at a leading law school, most agreed with the statement that earning a high salary was less important to them than job satisfaction.This finding suggests that the large, corporate firms of Megalopolis will need to offer graduates more benefits and incentives and reduce the number of hours they must work.
In this survey author concludes that corporate firms of Megalopolis will need to offer more benefits and incentives to law school graduates and they also need to reduce the number of hours they must work. To support his conclusion author cites the following facts about law school graduates : (1) The number of law school graduates who went to work for large, corporate firms declined by 15 percent over the last three years. (2) Even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries, law school graduates are more inclined to work for smaller firms because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. (3) In a survey of first-year students at leading law school, most of the students said that earning high salary was less important to them as compared to job satisfaction. The argument rests on a series of unsubstantial assumptions, and thus, not strong enough to lead to the author's conclusion.
Firstly, author sites that number of law school graduates joining large firm have declined by 15 percent over the last three years. Even if this is true, there could be multiple factors responsible for decrease in this number. For example, many times corporate firms have their offices in out skirts of cities, which makes its difficult for people to travel everyday. Hence, people would prefer working in smaller firms if they are close to their residence.
In addition, author assumes that, even though large firms usually offer much higher salaries,law school graduates are choosing to work in the smaller firms because they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms. Usually big corporate firms have a dedicated team to perform a particular task. For example, large corporate firms have a dedicated department to take care of all the paperwork and laws. However, small firms do not have such dedicated department to take care of these things. Which creates burden and stress on employee working. Hence, it cannot be assumed that they experience greater job satisfaction at smaller firms.
Citing survey of first-year students at a leading law school, author assumes that most of the students are less inclined towards high salary and job satisfaction is more important to them. Clearly, the survey is not fully representable as it represents a very smaller sample space and placements generally starts in the final year of any graduate program. Unless and until the survey is fully representative one cannot come to the conclusion that law graduates are more inclined towards working for a smaller firm.
Author could have supported his recommendation by taking a fully representative and reliable survey asking a wide range of people, to find out exact reason behind inclination towards smaller firms. Survey should also include students who are passed out and have joined these smaller firms in order to know exact reason behind why they chose working in smaller firm over large corporate firm. Additionally survey question should also include job satisfaction criteria and if they are present in large corporate firms.
In sum, the recommendation relies on certain doubtful assumptions. The argument with such obvious loopholes and fallacies do not stand up to a scrutiny. Had the author supported his argument by implementing more reliable survey, it would have helped him in bolstering his conclusion. However, in the absence of this data, the argument is unsubstantiated and hence author's stand is vindicated.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 556 350
No. of Characters: 2837 1500
No. of Different Words: 233 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.856 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.103 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.676 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 218 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 152 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.32 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.552 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 55.5748502994 133% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2950.0 2260.96107784 130% => OK
No of words: 555.0 441.139720559 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31531531532 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74141785855 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432432432432 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 705.55239521 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4206306982 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 27.0 5.15768463074 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.20758483034 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400103143265 0.218282227539 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117132625659 0.0743258471296 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130779882764 0.0701772020484 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124951588898 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147381298794 0.0628817314937 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 98.500998004 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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