In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town,we should encourage.Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area.The Hillview landfill which has been undevelopped for decades is a perfect site for this plant.the building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousand of Hillview residents left unemployed after computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year.i am asking the city council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer a significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing
To buttress the argument, one has written to Mayor of Hillview city that if Autotech is given permission in the city than it can increase the employment of the city. Moreover, it states that the Hillview landfill which is undeveloped since decades would be the perfect site. Even if company is not interested for coming to their city, city should try to attract them by taking necessary decision like tax incentives. Although the argument seems to be valid from one side, but by perusing it, it can be said that the success of this purposed solution is apocryphal. Reasoning behind my stand is as follows:
Firstly, it is written in Memo that there is a serious unemployment problem in town and for that purpose Autotech should be called to their city so that employment can be increased. In this base argument, there is a flaw in it. As the base of argument is based on the assumption that Autotech company would hire engineers of their city. There is no indication for the same. Even if this would be true, than also there is no signifcant evidence that how much automobile engineers are unemplyed in total unemployed people of the city. In futher argument, it is stated that there are unemployed software programming engineers but there is not concrete evidence about unemployed automobile engineers. If there not unemployed automobile engineers in significant number than the whole plan would be disasterous. On the counterargument, one might be tempted to say that it could give work to small workers who would be useful to develope the plant. But this counterargument is ostensible because the workers could get work for just a few years while the plant is developing state. So, the main purpose of the plant may not be fulfilled which tends to weaken the whole argument.
Secondly, the place on which purposed plant is to be built, is given as undeveloped since decades. But there is not any specific reason is given that why it is undeveloped since decades. There might be some problem with the land else it would not be undeveloped till now. So, no concrete evidence towards the benignity of land leave to be assumed that it is good which is also apocryphal.
Moreover, it is advised that city council should try to attract by taking various steps which includes financial benifits also. As the success of the plant can not be assured than financial benifit would be more financial burden to the city which may lead to bad situation.
Thus,in conlcusion, it can be said that the whole argument is based on the assumptions so Mayor should circumspects all the consequences before making any firm decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198770491803 0.25644967241 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.188524590164 0.15541462614 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901639344262 0.0836205057962 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047131147541 0.0520304965353 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0368852459016 0.0272364105082 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.139344262295 0.125424944231 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0512295081967 0.0416121511921 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7379686662 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030737704918 0.026700313972 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0881147540984 0.113004496875 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0450819672131 0.0255425247493 176% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184426229508 0.0127820249294 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2722.0 2731.13054187 100% => OK
No of words: 448.0 446.07635468 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07589285714 6.12365571057 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305803571429 0.378187486979 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254464285714 0.287650121315 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194196428571 0.208842608468 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.135150697306 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7379686662 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 207.018472906 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441964285714 0.469332199767 94% => OK
Word variations: 48.6312999662 52.1807786196 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.039408867 105% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3333333333 23.2022227129 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.263150956 57.7814097925 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.619047619 141.986410481 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 23.2022227129 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.724660767414 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.58251231527 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.7797619048 51.9672348444 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.42857142857 1.8405768891 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360368103664 0.441005458295 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172949697302 0.135418324435 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0929866843726 0.0829849096947 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538288939008 0.58762219726 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163901568557 0.147661913831 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158381467472 0.193483328276 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594350199263 0.0970749176394 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.387523895517 0.42659136922 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.143125734735 0.0774707102158 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238662773442 0.312017818177 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677417262877 0.0698173142475 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.87684729064 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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