To consider logically, the above argument would be harmonious in concluding that the channel should restart it's former policy in telecasting the local and weather news. However, the argument information are insufficient and we would need a lot to know about the manner of local business, demeanor of viewers, the channel's prestige in national level and so on to take a specific position on the argument.
First of all, we have to know about the reasons behind the lossing interests by the viewer on the late-night show. Did they stop enjoying the program just for the lacking of weather and local news or were there any logical region. It would be possible that the late night viewers were not interested in enjoying news, rather they were more interested in music or play or debating competition programs. If this happened then decreasing the weather and local news would not influence in ebbing the veiwers. Also, the number of viewers enjoyed the program in the past year and present year is not included in the argument. Without knowing the actual number and the number of viewers who complained, it would not be prudent to support the argument.
Another important issue in the channel, it is losing it's revenue as the local business cancels their contracts. The local business person could have a cheap way of advertising their product in another tv channel or internet or they could be interest enough to advertise their product in early morning, because recent studies shows that more people enjoy news program at early morning compared to late-night.
Also, the number of national viewer and the interest of national business could be very vital in determining the revenue gain. If more number of national viewer enjoy the late-night program, this may attract the attention of national business person. In this case, the revenue gain could increase.
Above all, Only cutting the weather and local news from the late night news program could not provide sufficient information on the cancellation of advertising contact or decreasing revenue or viewers complains. To justify it correctly, the information of number of national and local viewers, the number of viewer who complains, the monetary issues of the local business persons and their prime interest would necessary.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 374 350
No. of Characters: 1874 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.398 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.011 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.52 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.933 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.643 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.374 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10962566845 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59477479641 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3386229603 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235827148269 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942756682256 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608975323237 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139975673614 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058985663344 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.