The conclusion of argument is that if they want to attract more viewers to the program and avoid losing advertising revenues, they should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level. For support the conclusion arguer cites that when they increase time for national news and decrease time for weather and local news, they receive many complaints from viewers. Also arguer points out that local businesses that used to advertise during last night news program have cancelled their advertising contracts with them. But this argument suffer from several flaws and poor assumption, therefor is unpersuasive.
First of all, the arguer require to give proper information about complaints of their viewers. Perhaps it is possible that one or two person complain many times. So it is require that arguer give statistical data about the complains, So we know that how many person complain about the weather and local news.
Secondly, the arguer assume that the contract is cancelled because of increasing time for national news. Here arguer cannot assume that without any evidence.
It is possible that they cancel contract because of their businesses are in loss or news program increase the amount for giving advertisement in late-night program.
The arguer require to consider all this possibility and after this give any conclusion.
Another problem of this argument is that after they restore the time devoted to weather and local news, it is possible that their viewer are not increase or possible that they do not have any advertise. Then how they avoid losing loss. In this case they take survey of people and ask them which time they more comfortable for weather news, local news, and national news and then after take any decision.
In conclusion, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen the argument arguer find real reason for cancelling the contract and find solution of it. In order to better evaluate, the arguer give more information about the complains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...y receive many complaints from viewers. Also arguer points out that local businesses...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'giving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: giving
...ve. First of all, the arguer require to give proper information about complaints of ...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
... Perhaps it is possible that one or two person complain many times. So it is require t...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...wo person complain many times. So it is require that arguer give statistical data about...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...statistical data about the complains, So we know that how many person complain ab...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
...out the complains, So we know that how many person complain about the weather and local ne...
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Line 8, column 20, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: considering
...late-night program. The arguer require to consider all this possibility and after this giv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 328.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16768292683 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52431475968 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448170731707 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7390258186 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.70786347227 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 6.88822355289 203% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290556399317 0.218282227539 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951862204897 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101935345498 0.0701772020484 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136090416949 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110118020754 0.0628817314937 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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