A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
Seafood consumption is a delicacy in many regions around the globe . People tend to enjoy seafood more on vacations as it is an escape to their banal routine. Captian Seafood resturant can open a its outlet in the city but a more detailed research is required before we can jump on conclusions , hence we do not agree that there is an requirment of a new resturant any time soon. The reasons for the same will be elaborated in ensuing paragraphs .
The consumption of seafood is increased by 30 % which is a good consideration , for opening a new resturant. But the consumption may be increased due to the amount of tourists that visit the place and the tourists visits only a specific time in whole year , which can be a trouble for Captian seafood as for rest of the year , their business which is specific for seafood would be in a loss. The reason behind no outlet till now can also be a genuine because local people may not enjoy the seafood year long as tourists do. and the resturants which already have seafood are from long time and may be able to fulfil the demand , so there is an research required regarding the no of customers who visits the resturant are only intersted in sea food and no other forms of food .
Also the data is insufficent to open a dedicated outlet , because we dont know thatr the resturants which are in business have qualified chefs or not , may be they have expertise in making of sea food , therfore opening a dedicated outlet if cannot match the peoples ecpecatations should be in vain. Therefore a survey should be conducted among the customers referring to oother resturants , are they satisfied with the taste ? Do they require a specific outlet or not ?
The families with dual income may be prefreeing the market food over the home made ones , but we are concern about opening a outlet in a city so, the data of whole nation should not be considered . Because we are not aware about the lifestyle of the people in Bay City , as there is no data to support that , and if they are preferring less home-cooked food than what kind of food people generally eat ? Is it seafood or any other food ? We are not sure about that because its an indivual prefrence . The people may be satisfied with the food which are already being served in the resturants , so thinking that is baseless . There can be a huge demand of the other cuisine like the italian or something else which is not known .
A recent survey showed that in texas , during weekends people prefer outside food but from past 3 years people mostly search for healthy food , because to maintain their diet and it is seen in well-off families more as people are now taking health a serious topic after achieving a certain success in life . So nationwide data cannot support the opening of resturants that too without having proof of diet of people in the city.
Although a much detailed study is required to assess the lifestyle of people in Bay city, the increased consumption cannot be neglected , so it should be surveyed if it is an temporary effect or its all year round . After collecting this data it would be a more profitable deal for Captian sea food to open a outlet in bay city of specialzed sea food .
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 20 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 572 350
No. of Characters: 2563 1500
No. of Different Words: 241 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.89 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.481 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.481 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 176 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.166 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 19.6327345309 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2645.0 2260.96107784 117% => OK
No of words: 572.0 441.139720559 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62412587413 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53940775704 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 204.123752495 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410839160839 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 837.0 705.55239521 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2533701729 57.8364921388 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.952380952 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2380952381 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 5.15768463074 368% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 50.0 5.25449101796 952% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125590518395 0.218282227539 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480484794507 0.0743258471296 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442310729133 0.0701772020484 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505694999747 0.128457276422 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440620313619 0.0628817314937 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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