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Essay evaluation report
Out of topic.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1751 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.334 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.254 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.263 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.229 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 526, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...f the popular and common as a result of a aliquet have already told. The argument...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, as for, i mean, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 404.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4801980198 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31571543728 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.96107784431 222% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5900595455 57.8364921388 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2631578947 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0111361996015 0.218282227539 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00434891731387 0.0743258471296 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101217302417 0.0701772020484 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00903486979018 0.128457276422 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00859437793032 0.0628817314937 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.3550499002 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.5979740519 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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