Techno corporation is our top pick for the investment this term. We urge all our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed a stellite technology has been approvd by the FTA to compete with current satellite provider. The company is techno corporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of the respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not monopoly.Thus , the new venture of technocorporation into satellite televsion will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.
The newsletter calls upon its clients to invest in the new company Techcorporation. It boasts that it would be highly profitable for the clients to invest now in the Company.
The Techcorporation claims that the company is the first in ten years that has developed a satellite techonolgy approved by FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. There are several things to consider like- why was the technology first one to be approved by FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. If it was in terms of better picture or sound quality at same or minimally higher cost then sales of Techcorporation , probably increasing sales and resultingly an increase in profit for the investors. If it was approved on the basis that this technology only had lower cost of production or more eco-friendly ways of production, while having similar picture and sound quality ,people would prefer staying loyal to their providers, thus not increasing the profits.
It also asserts that a survey indicated 80% of the respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite provider. We need to consider who the respondents were. Were they people who lived in regions where the signals were weak for the current provider? These people would strongly want to move to a new oprator with better signals. Another reason may be the choice of channels that can be watched to . If the current customer does not provide a range of channels for reasonable prices, then are the tv plns。
Also a question that arises that why would they leave the current satellite provider? Is it due to some cause that Techcorporation would not be able to cater too. In that case these users may not shift to Techcorporation. Was it due to things like bad customer service which Techcorporation can improve upon and what is the amount of money needed to cater to these needs and whether it is feasible for techcorporation。
last the author claims that the investors who invest 'now' will be highly profitable. This claim casts a doubt that what would happen if the investor does not invest now. Are there high chances of downfall if there is a delay in investing in the Company.
So in all, the few questions to keep in mind while evaluating the final advice is the technological aspect as well as the conditions under which the survey was carried out. The time of investmeant also seems to be skeptical. By answering these question we can take a better stance at evaluating the advice.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The Techcorporation claims that the company is the first in ten years that has developed a satellite techonolgy approved by FTA to compete with the current satellite provider.
Error: techonolgy Suggestion: technology
Sentence: If it was in terms of better picture or sound quality at same or minimally higher cost then sales of Techcorporation , probably increasing sales and resultingly an increase in profit for the investors.
Error: resultingly Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: If it was approved on the basis that this technology only had lower cost of production or more eco-friendly ways of production, while having similar picture and sound quality ,people would prefer staying loyal to their providers, thus not increasing the profits.
Error: eco-friendly Suggestion: friendly
Sentence: These people would strongly want to move to a new oprator with better signals.
Error: oprator Suggestion: operator
Sentence: Another reason may be the choice of channels that can be watched to .
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: If the current customer does not provide a range of channels for reasonable prices, then are the tv plns?
Error: tv Suggestion: me
Error: plns Suggestion: plus
Sentence: In that case these users may not shift to Techcorporation.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Was it due to things like bad customer service which Techcorporation can improve upon and what is the amount of money needed to cater to these needs and whether it is feasible for techcorporation?
Error: techcorporation Suggestion: corporation
Sentence: The time of investmeant also seems to be skeptical.
Error: investmeant Suggestion: investment
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 419 350
No. of Characters: 2001 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.524 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.776 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.773 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.045 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.875 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.591 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.56 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...igher cost then sales of Techcorporation , probably increasing sales and resulting...
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Line 2, column 699, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...having similar picture and sound quality ,people would prefer staying loyal to the...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hoice of channels that can be watched to . If the current customer does not provid...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...reasonable prices, then are the tv plns a Also a question that arises that why w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 420.0 441.139720559 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86428571429 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8530146345 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.097191572 57.8364921388 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.15 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200228325458 0.218282227539 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617018418019 0.0743258471296 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524991232818 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106014035686 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684932294315 0.0628817314937 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.