While it may be true that woven baskets were made not only by Paleans but also by people in Lithos, the author does not present a cogent argument. That fact that the encountered of the same pattern of weaving was found in two places separated by a deep wide river without evidence of the existence of boats may seem to be convincing at first glance, but the author’s supporting ideas rely on several assumptions and flaws that weaken his proposal.
According to the author, remains of woven baskets with a unique pattern were found close to the Palean village, and therefore this manufacture is c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237191650854 0.25644967241 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.168880455408 0.15541462614 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796963946869 0.0836205057962 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0777988614801 0.0520304965353 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0284629981025 0.0272364105082 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115749525617 0.125424944231 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0588235294118 0.0416121511921 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70357648627 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0379506641366 0.026700313972 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102466793169 0.113004496875 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151802656546 0.0255425247493 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011385199241 0.0127820249294 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2911.0 2731.13054187 107% => OK
No of words: 478.0 446.07635468 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.089958159 6.12365571057 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.57801047555 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374476987448 0.378187486979 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292887029289 0.287650121315 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171548117155 0.208842608468 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110878661088 0.135150697306 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70357648627 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 207.018472906 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468619246862 0.469332199767 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.2440700699 52.1807786196 102% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.039408867 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9 23.2022227129 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8171710118 57.7814097925 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.55 141.986410481 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 23.2022227129 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.724660767414 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.58251231527 0% => OK
Readability: 53.1887029289 51.9672348444 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.49655172414 1.8405768891 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447230512064 0.441005458295 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122287434161 0.135418324435 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0857965597312 0.0829849096947 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526082493135 0.58762219726 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163452435892 0.147661913831 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172609632382 0.193483328276 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843454706684 0.0970749176394 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380056767048 0.42659136922 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0424834644768 0.0774707102158 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311108010235 0.312017818177 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363325191858 0.0698173142475 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.82512315271 187% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.82389162562 212% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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