Parents should participate in their children's activities. Involvement of the parents will make the child happy and also the child takes extra interest and will try to finish the task successfully. Parents volunteering in school is a medium of spending time with their children.
Nowadays children and parents spending time together has kind of reduced due to several reasons. One of them is parents working. Even though it is necessary in today's world, every parent must make sure that they spend enough time with their kids. Volunteering in school is a way in which parents can keep an eye on their child and also help the school. By volunteering, parents will get a chance to meet their child's class teacher, they will get to know about the child's behavior, his/hers progress. It's not that without volunteering all these will not happen, but through volunteering a parent gets enough time for interaction with the teacher.
It is common that, if you know a person well than there are more chances that you will open up with that person more freely. So, by volunteering a parent will get to know the teacher well and the parent will also get to know the teacher's abilities to teach a student. Sometimes, it may happen that some teachers will not be doing what they are supposed to do. Hence, parents should do volunteering in school.
Having said that, there should be no requirement that parents should do volunteering in school. Because, many parents might find it difficult to do volunteering as they will be really busy in their life. Working parents will find it difficult. If the school makes it a requirement that the parents should do volunteering, then if a parent misses a volunteering schedule or will not do volunteering, then this may jeopardize the child's position in the school because, the school may require to ask the parents to seek admission in other school. If this the case, then it will harm the child because the child may like the school and does not want to leave the school. If this happens then, it might happen that the child may not like the other school and may not show any interest in the new school's activity.
Hence, volunteering is a good way to keep the parents aware of their child's participation in school but, it should not be made compulsory by the school.
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