In this age of intensive media coverage,it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
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It assertions that in this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Society can consider a person as a hero who is succeed in own carrier field. who has practical morals which is useful for new generation. On one hand, person could be a hero in eyes of society by his or her achievements, dedication to work, ideas. If achiever is transparent and pure then media coverage does not affect the reputation of that person. On other hand , People are blind followers of media, if media represent the news in articulate way then it affects the reputation of that person. However, Media play the important role in human life so it may be affects the life of any celebrity and it is difficult for the society to regard any living man or women as a hero.
Firstly, There are many news channels, news papers, magazines in market. Everyone want Publicity and higher business. Media unnecessarily follows the celebrities. They capture the small mistakes of celebrity and represent in the articulate way, which attracts the viewers. So it gains the TRP. But that small mistake of celebrity affects their carrier. Because public believes the media. When these type of mistakes committed by media in regular life media even does not focus on it.
Secondly, Sometimes media represent new issues without know the real fact. And people follows that, and when reality proved that time media does not accept the guilt and own mistake. They rarely correct their mistakes. So that person get the negative image in front of society without committed the crime.
Thirdly, Media exposes the negativity, unethical characters, illegal activity
Of famous people . Which people follows that person or consider as own ideal they can not believe in that but media again and again represent it , and that famous person loss own followers. Sometimes if celebrity did a good job in life relevant to human it will be ignored by media.Sometimes media represent the good behavior and dedication of person to the public and society consider them as the real hero of society. For example, Anna Hazare, He is the Real hero of country. He fights against the corruption for public. And media represent him in actual way. Many followers follow their principles.
However, If public does not follow the media blindly, if people judge their own point and then accept media does not affect the reputation of celebrity. If people believe in own view then negative points does not affects the reputation of that people. For example, sahrukh khan, whether he commited any crime at vankhede stadium he does not loss his fans. People love him as usual.
At conclusion, Because of blind belief of society in media and articulate way for representation of details of media, it affects the reputation of famous person and for society it is difficult to regard any person as a hero.
Sentence: Society can consider a person as a hero who is succeed in own carrier field. who has practical morals which is useful for new generation.
Description: The fragment practical morals which is not usually followed by is
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Sentence: Everyone want Publicity and higher business.
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Sentence: Secondly, Sometimes media represent new issues without know the real fact.
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Sentence: So that person get the negative image in front of society without committed the crime.
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