The author’s statement that government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than carrying out the will of the people they serve may not be true in a truly democratic government. In a loosely coalesce governments in some places in Africa and Asia, officials can make judgment without any regard to the people’s will but in the Western regions there exist a high degree of regard to the people they serve. In a democratic system, government is of the people, by the people and for the people. Any government official that carries out government policies with his own discretion withou...
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