Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement, here, emphasizes that the Government officials should not act on the whims and wishes of the people they are serving or reporting but rather should exercise their own judgment. Be it a government headed by a Prime Minister, as in most of the countries in Indian subcontinent or headed by President, as in USA or a group of ministers as in Switzerland, the administrative officials are always bounded by the government in power or by the minister they are reporting. The government officials are recruited through competitive examinations and are trained specifically in the domain they...
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting 72
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.Write a response in which you 67
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.Write a response in which you discuss the extent 70
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 76
- The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend Of the two leading real estate firms in our town Adams Realty and Fitch Realty Adams Realty is clearly superior Adams has 40 real estate agents in contrast Fitch has 25 many of whom work only 63
Sentence: But, this cost him his life, he was murdered on the same road by the men of politicians, whom he went against.
Description: The word cost is not usually used as a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to cost
flaws:
Don't forget paragraphs.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 515 350
No. of Characters: 2472 1500
No. of Different Words: 257 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.764 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.8 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.813 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 172 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 77 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.409 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.932 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.591 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5