GRE Issue 137
Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
We always value education a most important issue and expect the educational organizations to do the best to guarantee a good one for every single student. While in many situations our expectations are reasonable, sometimes the responsibility we expect the institutions to undertake is somehow exorbitant. This issue about whether an educational institution has a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed is one of such cases. Although I concede the opinion in this issue is worth thinking about sometimes, in most situations I do not agr...
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Sentence: Given the educational institution cannot be aggressive to make judgment instead of the students themselves, they do have responsibility to provide information as a good reference for the students to make a wise judgment.
Description: The fragment Given the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Given with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
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