The increasingly rapid pace of life today cause more problems than it solves.
the issue of the increasing rapid pace of life today cause more problem than it solves is a contentious one. it depend on the perspective of the person that he enjoys this fast life or fell to be trapped here. however, i broadly agree with the fact that by increasing the pace of life we has successfully fulfill our voracious needs but also beget many issues.
first of all, a person living a fast paced life style suffers from stress related issues which increase more with this kind of life style. for example if a machine does a ponderous work then it would effect on its life and also on performance, similarly today man is also facing same problem with this metro life.
in addition, this kind of life style also require more natural resources to fulfill the growing needs in quick time. although nature work with its constant rate, therefore, inducing the dearth of resources. as we all know the present world is fighting with the problem of getting the resources for our city life.
finally, people are so busy with their work that it is effecting him physically and more mentally. many problems we see today related to deficiency of hormones, heart related, getting short temper also nuclear family issues are other side effect of this life. they forgot to enjoy their life for which they are working. they have set a race to get the best and losing the things which they have with.
in final analysis, like to conclude that we should chase the running stars and get them but not on the cost of himself. living with course of nature is the most efficient way to live.
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