Issue Topic:Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
The author here is categorizing people into two categories, depending upon their views. He states that there is one group, referred as the small group, of people who think that the responsibility of the corporations is to look after the welfare of the premises in which they operate. On the contrary there are the remaining ones, present in majority, who believe that their mere aim is to make as much money as possible. I personally feel that the times have changed and the latter group of people are correct at their part.
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How can I hit the 5.5 mark?
How can I hit the 5.5 mark?
This is how you got
This is how you got 5.0:
Essay E-rater: 5.5
Human grader: 5.0 (It is a good one and it deserves 5.5, and we have put it at top list. We gave it 5.0 because of your history record)
final marks: (5.5+5.0)/2=5.0 (We don't give 5.25)
You see, there are no great difference between 5.0 and 5.5.
It is on top list:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 512 350
No. of Characters: 2419 1500
No. of Different Words: 252 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.757 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.725 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.547 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.381 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.847 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5