Issue Topic:
The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree
Since the dawn of civilization, the man has advanced from being a primitive hunter-gatherer to being an utterly sophisticated species. This has been made possible only because of technological and social advancements that has been engendered due to spirit of competition as well as co-operation amongst men. No one can make significant and noticeable progress with only one of these in any field. In order to be successful in today's fast paced life, we have to be both competitive in what we are doing and at the same time, collaborating with others on our work and ideas. We have common problems li...
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