As long as people in a society are hungry or out of work or lack the basic skills needed to survive, the use of public resources to support the arts is inappropriate—and, perhaps, even cruel—when one considers all the potential uses of such money.
First priority should be given to fulfil the basic needs for every human then automatically there will be attrition in unemployment and starvation. If people don’t have enough skill, they can’t cope up with the world. As they don’t have any skill they cannot suit for any job, therefore they were left unemployed. Without any job they cannot feed even themselves and their families. And without food, people die of hunger. As asserted in the issue, basic needs like food, shelter and skills are most important to survive one’s life happily. Without the basic needs what is the use of ...
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